|Reviews for The Lollipop|
| ArrancarRayflo chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Wonderful, it was so wonderful and cute:D. I knew lollipops were implements of mass seduction:D.:)
| DAIrinchan chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
This fic shows so much why Raikou's my favorite Nabari character! I love it!
| foxkitsune7 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Lol! Ive been looking for raikou x gau stories and this one was awsome!
Hope you write more!
| LovelessDuchess chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I loved it! I can see Raikou playing mean game on Gau like this.
| HoboWithComputer chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
That is hilarious! Thumbs up!
| Akemi713 chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I love Raiko X3
And I do believe Gau would look cute turned on, Lol dirty thoughts!
Would you write a smut scene for them? Please? XD
| RaiineDays chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Hehe bad Raikou! Distracting poor Gau like that ;)
I love these two. And this fic. I will forever see them as canon.
And I share Gau's dislike of candy/food left sitting on furniture.
| Beef Samosa chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
I really didn't like it. Too cliche and typical for me. HOWEVER, you have lots and lots of potential to write something original and fantastic.
| Silverlaugh chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
"... You're cute when you're turned on." Fave line of anything EVER.
LOL I loved this, It was too adorable. I think you understand these characters very well, it shows in your writing. Great job
| Vermillion Serpent chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
XD Love it so much!
Aww this was really well written and made me laugh a lot! Hehe this is something they should have done in the animé XD
| Hassohappa chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Thanks for writing this - like Tenpa said, this pairing gets way too little love! I really enjoyed reading it!
| Yuruki14 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
AH! I loved your story! It was so cute! I hope you write a second chapter and soon! I'm so desperate for a new RaikouxGau fic I'm ready to implode! Anyway, it was really well written and Nabari no Ou rocks o.o
| Tenpa27 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
First of all, thank you SO much for writing this. There just simply is not enough love for this pairing. Gau is my favorite fictional character of anything, ever, so you can imagine how absolutely excited I was when I found this. I was grinning before i could even finish reading the summary. And let me say, I was definitely not disappointed. Your characterizations of Raikou and Gau are definitely spot-on, both with Raikou's teasing and playfulness, and Gau's overall being flustered :)
Your writing was great, I only found one very minor mistake. There's a part that says "not daring to more his hand" that I think is supposed to be "move." Also, I'm not sure if this was intentional or not, but shortly after that, Gau calls Raikou "Raikou," without the honorific.
At any rate, I loved this story, and encourage you to please write more of this pairing! I look forward to your future stories :)