|Reviews for light years away from a shooting star|
| Dance Elle Dance chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Amazing. Wonderfully written. Hope to read more Dair from you in the future!
| Wozzler chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
despite being a bit confused over the timeline, i love this. amazing.
| anon chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Just discovered your story and found it so beautiful. Thanks for sharing! If only it had gone that way in the show!
| poupeedepapier chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
I want to cry , this was perfect .
| slimkay chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
That was beautiful. Mesmerizing. I actually have no other words to describe this; it was a flawless oneshot. Your portrayal of DB was just so accurate. And the banter... and the prose.
Your outtakes were disjointed at face value but it all felt seamless to me; your storytelling skills are very good my friend.
Keep it up. I hope this is not your last DB fic. It'd be a shame.
| realchemistry chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
That's lovely :)
I like how they progressed, loved the meeting in the rain, the skydiving, helping S with Nate, the wedding...
| chiara chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
the timeline was a bit confusing. Generally like the writing, though. I like how you painted dair's natural and effortless intimacy.
| skullmunkey chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Excellent story. It took things slow and steady and stayed pretty in character for the both of them.