Reviews for such a pretty boy
Spinner Rose chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Oh gosh, this is so beautiful. Your use of wording in each line is impeccable, and you write sentences that reverberate and shake your readers to the core. Every single line had me hooked until the end of the story. It's almost like a song, our writing. It flows in such a rhythm. I quite liked it. Bravo!
alixxblack chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I don't know how to feel about this but I feel something. I felt it necessary to review it because it won't be forgotten, this story.
Jayjay1304 chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
OMG!Such a sad Bori fic!U dont usally get these type of rality ones and theyre amazing!
A Bittersweet Liar chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
beautiful.
Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Too bad he had to waste away like such. Such a beautiful story :x
elinashine chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
OMG...the ending is awsome...i don't like tragedy stories especially with this couple but this story is just perfect.!
XquizitSimplicity chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
One word. Fantastic. Loved it.
seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
let me die.

i love everything you write, so this was no exception. ugh. this is so pretty. i mean, everything you write is pretty, but this one is really pretty and sad and everything is so wrong but so right. everything flows perfectly.

and at the end. ugh. crying.
The Phantom Of The Labyrinth chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Your stories are sad, but so well written, that they bring me to tears everytime!
of monsters and me chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I like it, however dark, because you make it so realistic.

"...and he's losing himself for the money he makes." that's a really powerful line, and I love it. It portrays everything so precisely and simply.

"I am a slave to my addictions." Also a simple yet precise line.

Those two are probably my favorites.

keep ritin foreva

bookluva98
softasthunder chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Wait, wait, I like this, but there are some things I don't understand. Whose the father to baby Beck? And Tori loves Beck, but Beck loves Jade..? I don't understand that.
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Good Story
Ashboo211 chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Oh no.

He really is a slave to his own addictions.

Poor Beck and Tori.

Great write.
I am an anonymous person chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Well. Um. Wow. This is super sad. Cool idea, though. It's rather depressing but I liked it. Good job :)