Aww... I freaking love this story! You definitely deserve WAY more reviews than this . Please update soon (L)!

ROFL. I died laughing! BAWAHAHAHAH! Oh Scorpion and Sub-zero! Those two are like comedians!

ROFL. I was mortified XD

Mmmm...getting drunk...only leads to one thing!

Puking into each other's mouths or masks xD hahahaha okay, sorry, just gotta get that outta my system. Ah...such nice dialogue and conversation between Scorp and Sub. Can't wait for the next chapter :D

ha! this was good. I love the image of sub zero being chased. the story is great, i'm excited for the the next chapter

I was smiling the whole time they were sitting outside talking xD! I love this story and I can't wait for you to update! :}

I forgot to add after the capitalized letters to add more capitalized letters... Here they are: OR ANY GIRL FOR THAT MATTER... Yes, yes Smoke is my fav of all time, sheesh I need fangirl help /).(\

Dawwwwhhh! . this was the best ever! Plz, plz, PLZ, continue... Word of warning though... DON'T LET SMOKE HAVE UNCALLED FOR SEX WITH THAT SERVANT CHICK... I do apologize, but u do get what I mean right?

*grinning like an idiot*

This is soooo awesome! Oh my god!

I loved it! :D

You can feel like...the romance or whatever that feeling is!

Oh my god! I can't wait until the next chapter! :DDD

Oh and don't rush the story! Keep it slow. As you can see, it's doing well for the story! :D

Smoke as a drunk with the ladies around him? xD LOLOL!

I love this chapter! Can't wait to see what happens between Scorpion and Sub-Zero in the next one!

My god this story is officially my favorite story. This chapter is so frigging cool. I love how confused Sub-Zero is. Update soon , please :).

Ahhhh I love this chapter 8D

that blue makes my eyes stand out thing was funny to me xD

But he realizes his attraction to scorpian me gusta A

Wasting time doing whatever ftw

And their technical tension is me gusta B :3

Hnng. This is perfect. You're perfect.

Ohmygod all my feels about them.

Please don't stop. (gonna go back to lurking now, but know that everything about this is amazing)

Hnng. This is perfect. You're perfect.

Ohmygod all my feels about them.

Please don't stop. (gonna go back to lurking now, but know that everything about this is amazing)

I love this story...every time I see that it is updated I get excited! I have to say that I am happy that Scorpion is cutting his hair off...I can't wait for you to update! :)