Reviews for Colors for the Potters
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Very nice story about the colors in the Potters' lives! I especially liked the part about 'dusk' and lol at 'pink'! :)

Gryffindor (only one 'o')

It reminded him that their was always something their watching over him... [each 'their' should be 'there' in this paragraph]

Great line: 'he always kept a little yellow in his life.'

Every year on the anniversary of their first date they went on a picnic. {Wonderful idea!} :)

'Gold and Blue were too of the few colors...' [two]
don't.diss.the.puff chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
That was cute and sweet!

I didn't really understand the part about what clashed with people's hair though- I don't get why that should define favorite colors.