|Reviews for the anatomy of goodbye|
| Dsman chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
| Sachita chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Beautifully-written. I like the way you write- so careful and thoughtful. Mason and Daisy really are like your story- jumbled moments thrown together, jumbled, but still beautiful and meaningful in their own way. Reading this is like watching the light break in a diamond- there are so many facettes to Mason and Daisy that we can only ever catch glimpses of their relationship. Hope that makes sense :) I really liked your comparison of Daisy's hair with the sunlight. Also, your explanation at the end was very nicely-done. Great job!
| CriesofCapricorn chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Ouch. This describes their characters and relationship very, very well.
And it is VERY well-written! I just love the poetry in it all!