i would DIE for regulus severus and remus. and im so excited that hermione got straight Os she deserved it.

severus snape was born to be a spy oh i love him. regulus still my fav character tho hes just so funny

YEAHHH SHE DID FIENDFYRE AND DESTROYED IT I LOVE HER

im actually glad severus was the first to know because i trust his mind to keep the information guarded and i think he'd be a useful ally! and i need her to master fiendfyre because that horcrux makes me nervous!

me shipping hermione with severus LMAOOO oops. AND BABY PETER HES DOING SO GOOD AWW I THINK I LOVE HIM. also i need that bloody horcrux destroyed already. and im intrigued by how her first meeting with avery will go when it happens.

the way i like regulus more than i like sirius. he's just so interesting and smart and funny. my fav character thus far. also a big fan of severus. and remus.

oh dear. i dont know if i want sirius to know yet im gonna faint

her hugging severus desperately because she just wants to save him so badly almost teared up! SO HAPPY reg is here now too he is so interesting i love his characterization.

1. i love that hermione ignored them for weeks. women who hold men accountable for their actions!
2. that was a CUTE first kiss. sirius is so funny.
3. im glad hermione went off about how ridiculous it was to just categorize an entire house as evil! a perfect smart woman. if only she could've told him how his precious gryffindor peter becomes a death eater and that severus snape is a hero! that would show him!
4. i do love what she does for peter tho and hope that she helps him stay on the good path! and hope she saves reg too actually thats her future brother in law after all!

1. hermione and snape are so! love them so bad!
2. I LOVE WHEN HERMIONE BECOMES AN ANIMAGUS OH IM GONNA SQUEAL

ahh! hermione being the one to encourage sirius to choose for himself is adorable i loved that. i also enjoyed her discomfort when the boys brought up snape. i love seeing snape and hermione interact because their dynamic is always interesting, so im excited to see their relationship in this. hermione slytherins is my weak spot.

i love two things about this: that she knows immediately that the time change is permanent and that time rewrites itself to fit her instead of her being misplaced. in so many fics, hermione wastes so much time researching ways to return to her time until she inevitably gives up, which i feel is as much a waste of time to read as it is for her. she is also almost always alone when she arrives, with no family that knows and loves her yet, which would not make anybody happy, even one who is determined to save the world and knows that sacrifices have to be made. i am very excited to see how this plays out.

This chapter warmed my Sirmione heart. They're just so compatible and get one another. I love the light hearted flirting and the seriousness of their conversations.

I love Remus's protectiveness of Hermione and him making her promise not to practice unforgivables alone. The siblingship that James and Hermione share warms my heart. I loved the scene between the two of them.

I love that the cup might be in Grimmauld Place and that not all the horcruxes are where they were in canon, even though they are with the same Death Eater. I don't really know how they'd get into Gringotts, without the fuss that was caused in DH, so this plot seems a lot less chaotic haha.

I am excited to see how this story progresses and have had a blast reading it so far. I'm excited for your next update, whenever it comes, but no pressure at all. I'm just glad to be along for the ride :)

Aww I loved the mix of jokes and seriousness in this chapter. I really love the way you write Remus - gentle but mischievous (he was a Marauder after all!). I love that you had him accompany Hermione when Sirius couldn't. I think you hit on the characterization of everyone so so well. I LOVE Scabior, which is something I could not have seen myself saying until reading this fic haha.

I hate the idea of Hermione practicing the Unforgivables. I know she feels like she has to but I do love that Harry never felt the need to (aside from the blind rage he felt toward Bellatrix after Sirius falls through the veil) against Voldemort. I'm conflicted! Thank you also for the sweet Lily/Sev content in this. Your Severus is so broody but loveable.

Lastly, I do love reading your A/Ns haha. I discovered we're about the same age and I gotta say I can't imagine myself writing such a complex and well thought out fic at 18 haha. Brava

Ah young love. Charlus trying to have the sex talk with them made me holler. What a cinnamon roll.

I'm torn on whether I love or hate the fact that the group of people who know about the you-know-whats :) is so large. I love it because Hermione has such a huge support system and I love that you intentionally didn't have all of them know she's a time-traveler so there's a subset within the group of people helping her that know everything and those that just know some things. I wonder if it's reckless but I honestly don't think I care because I love all the dynamics between the Marauders/Lily, Hermione, and the Slytherins. It's perfect