|Reviews for Stargate: Return of the Ancients, Season 2, Ep 6|
| Nagato wannabe chapter 4 . 1/14/2014
wow the story keeps leaning on the improbable each chap... shield towers being built as fast if not faster than replicator blocks forming? i mean you didn't really specify the time frames but it stated that shepherd's fleet was a couple of minutes out when the battle started and when he reached the battle the enemy already had shield towers on the ground with its shields just activating after.
| Nagato wannabe chapter 3 . 1/14/2014
for ten thousand years they plan to kill the wraith then suddenly one of them just goes ahead and allies himself with the wraith. REALLY?
| Nagato wannabe chapter 2 . 1/14/2014
why the hell do they have to be enemies?
| Spearhead chapter 5 . 1/17/2012
Good chapter :D loving the siege :) can't wait for more
| Nh97103 chapter 5 . 1/1/2012
Did you get burnt out writing or something? It's been months since an update.. Anyway, I'm not sure why, but I really like this Zoe character. I hope she ends up helping them in some way soon.
On a side note, I have 2 different Stargate Atlantis books and they were no where near as good as your writing. Don't get me wrong, they were alright and were entertaining, but still no where near your writing. You ever thought of getting this story published as a book? It's definitely better than the one's I've read.
Well, Happy New Year, and I hope you give us an update soon! :)
| jasminesmommy chapter 5 . 1/1/2012
so the ascended pitted them against each other so much for not interfearing :)
| Emily.B chapter 5 . 12/15/2011
Hey this is a great story the first 'episode' I read I thought I might not like it bueni kept reading and it is amazing, absolutely amazing.!
Please update soon
I was also wondering what's happening with sam and cam and the group they made after breaking away from the IOA (which I thought was a great idea because I don't think they'd just sit by and let themselves get told what to do by politicians) and like what is happening personally like how is Sam feeling about the people in Pegasus Nx other things since life is obviously being shit with her? and once the people who left earth for Pegasus come back what will happen to them like will they be accepted or will they're be a grudge?
So yes please continue been waiting for ages your a great writer and I'm looking forward to the next episode love you xxx
| oldman543 chapter 5 . 12/15/2011
Too much plot twists. Dozens of different things going on and none of them bein resolved. Crazy. Literally. Love the story but this is overly ambitious me thinks. Here's hoping you prove me wrong.
| Harbinger chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
well said old chap!
| Nathan chapter 5 . 11/13/2011
First of all, your grammar is atrocious. Secondly, what was the point of that comment? Just to make people feel bad? Seriously? I completely agree with what Aer-ki Jyr wrote about Earth. Right now, all politics are is one big, greedy mess. I wouldn't put his writings above us at the moment. And besides that, what about Stargate SG-1? It had a lot of episodes portraying how corrupt we are becoming; so how come you act like it's the first you've heard of Earth being corrupt? So take a writing class, and kindly be quiet.
| tmoz chapter 5 . 11/6/2011
fuck u motherfucker,u hate earth,hate meritocracy,hate ur fellow kind,cmon the whole point bhd stargate franchise is to showcase terra rising 2 a superpower n u motherfucker missed that n ur writin is crap get a job.
| nh97103 chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
It's been months and still no update? :'( Don't forget about us!
| Emily chapter 5 . 9/20/2011
Great story absolutely love it umm can the Nxt episode pls be about earth because I'm really interested in what's happening
| blakagant chapter 5 . 9/9/2011
wtf? seems like a mighty large backflip, and a waste of 10,000years...
| Pokethat chapter 5 . 9/4/2011
A death star would be nice right about now... or a Halo ring
Well for the past 2 days I've read through all your episodes and I'm astonished at the quality. I rarely see anything so interesting, I can tell you were a long time stargate fan just like me. After SGU died I didn't think Id be seeing any good stargate material coming out, official or otherwise.
I have to admit I was a bit peeved when I started reading that the central-most character was an OC, but it ended up working, and that's not easy to do. Also I usually doubt people abilities to keep multiple subplots going, but you have plats for each galaxies and different dimensions running parallel and I'm like...WTH how am I NOT confused. Seriously ,most fanfiction authors, and many professional ones have problems writing a linear plot, but you are pulling massive parallelism and not tying it up.
I don't know If I mention it but I think you corrected some of the bigger plot holes in the real series:
1:the alterran plague- the the most technologically advanced people on the block and a measly virus kills them-WTH,
The Idea of a an ascended supervirus sounds better
2: The ascended ancients are willing to let their home galaxy be over taking by the Gua'uld and Pegasus by their bane, the wraith, why not kill them all?- the idea of them being subjugated fits better.
3: The Asgard- another uber-race killed due to health problems...whats worse the commit mass suicide-WTH, Your idea is way better.
4: The Furlings- nuff' said
5: Nox- We kinda forgot about them, but then again they are conspicuously absent from your latest episodes :/
6: clone Jack-nuff'saif
That's it for now, but some things you might want to consider that I've thought about:
1:That one episode where all of Abiddos is ascended; that would seem like it would tip the balance of the Empire a bit
2: With all the Start Wars references, I think a lightsaber should appear in this story... just for the awesomeness factor. And maybe a Deathstar, I mean if you have technology to kill all life in a galaxy and manipulate space/time and create portals to everywhere, blowing up a planet is cake... delicious cake.
3: The Arcutus project that McKay almost got to work makes the pontentia seem like a AA battery. Or maybe make use of the Ori method?
just occurred to me, what if the Wraith fed on whales beneath Atlantis o_0
4: maybe take a page from Halo and have one of the AI try to gain true sentience.
5: super-drones (pesque?) with hyper-drives that hyper-drive INSIDE of the enemy ground bases or ships, I doubt they would have jammers on their own ships and it would be silly to have them on their bases ... or nukes... Why not just destroy wraith world from the inside out, or cause a super nova on the systems star, all it takes is the right tech and BOOM, problem solved, with like one ship.
Dunno all these things occurred to me while reading your series so far, just some thoughts. This has become one of my favorite series on FFnet and I await fro your next update :)
Also this is my longest review ever