Reviews for True Love Waits
chaosdiy chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
maybe nothing would have gotten resolved because they were just kids... but if Charlie hadn't intervened.. maybe they would have been able to talk more...
mycrookedsmile chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
einfach mich: ripping hearts from chests, one at a time. Think of the poor E/B only reader who stumbles upon your story without knowing you, they'll be traumatized. j/k.

Both times I read it (the compilation and then here), I actually thought it was going to end tragically- I thought she was going to fall off the roof when he moved toward her.

You've told just enough for us to understand, but not so much that we can't imagine how to fill in the blanks.
MagicBliss chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Wow. Loved this story. Really enjoyed the flashbacks and the storyline. LOVED the angst. And really appreciated that she was going to give him a second chance at the end. You had me worried. :)

xoxo
lavishone chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Wow. An E/B story from you?...

And yet, it has your fingerprints all over it. The uncertaintly and the angst show themselves to be yours...

Not really a happy story. But one with hope.
lisamichelle17 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I read this Fandom Fights Tsunami's and I am so happy that you decided to post it. I loved this Edward and Bella but I also have to tell you I am a fan of your Edward and Leah *winks* I love that your Bella is so strong and that she fights at every turn to stay the hell away from Edward. The past they share is hard and I have to admit that it made me think about a prequel even though it is not necessary. I have to tell you that I am so happy that I got to meet you at Comic Con. You call yourself a bitch but I think you are very honest and real. That makes you even better.
sassy41 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
wow seems bella has been through quite a bit. i understand why she is so hurt and bitter. though her dad was a hero to the town and very much loved it seems the love did not extend to bella. seems edward gave up much for bella but then again he didn't claim her in front of others. hmmmm i am waiting to see what bella does. she is in alot of pain and being back in a town that hasn't been so nice wonder what her next step is.

looking forward to the next chapter
chele681 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Adorable, and ouch, and swoon.
Stefy101 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
So cute!

Awesome writing style. you have amazing talent!

Stefy101
CdrIvanova chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Liked this! Horrid what she had to go through, though.
SussexBelle chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Just one word - beautiful

I hope you chose to continue. I'd love to hear more back story and where this goes xxx
sadtomato chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I like the way this is told in flashback, and the juxtaposition of the two scenes on the roof of the church. God the confrontation after her abortion hurt to read... it was really vivid and painful, for both of them really. I am a little surprised that Bella forgave him at the end, though. I could see forgiving him for the freakout after the abortion, but to me some of his other behavior would have kept me away. It seems like he was projecting his shame onto her maybe... something about him keeping her a secret really bothered me. If I were Bella I would want to SEE that he's changed before I would decide to forgive or try again. That being said, the thought of being able to let go of all the pain and anger she's been carrying with her really resonated with me too. I would love to read Edward's version of this. I'm glad you wrote this and I'm glad I read it despite the promise of angst. :) xoxoxo
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Lol, after all that back and forth on Twitter and it turns out I had already read this when I got my compilation :-P

Oh, well, it's still just as great now as it was then. You're always dependable with the awesome stories...although NOTHING will ever top CoaDW. nothing!
bookjunkie1975 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
You know what I like about you? Aside from your just general awesomeness, that is. I like how, whenever I finish one of your stories I always feel like I'm taking something away with me. You have this remarkable ability to make me think, even while you entertain me. Sometimes your stories are challenging, sometimes provocative and sometimes just plain sexy but always they engage me, both my heart and my mind. That's kind of a rare treat in these parts. So I guess I just want to say thanks. Thanks for sharing and thanks for being brave and thanks for letting us into your head. Oh, and as for this story (which I just now realized I didn't really review) I particularly loved the way you managed to keep the tone balanced between Bella's angst and her dry, caustic world view. I was worried when I started because you called it an angstfest but I actually found myself laughing quite a bit. :)
Bella Donna101 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
I like it, are you think about make it into a story or a two shot?
pepamarie chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
This was so beautifully written. I don't usually read the hurt/comfort genre tbh but I'm glad I read this one. Thanks for sharing it :)