|Reviews for Green Eyed Monster|
| Opera123 chapter 111 . 10/5
amazing story thank you for sharing your gift with others
| Leosilver chapter 111 . 8/27
And we've reached the end. I must say I LOVED your story, I really liked the way you played Audrey. And despite minor reservations such as her relationship with Harry, which practically did not exote , I understand that they are people with opposite personalities with different houses z but both are still brothers and the two seem to only remember that at 45 of the second t, it was only at the very end that they started to act like brothers, especially Harry (Which was a bit disappointing, Audrey's relationship with her friends was much more developed than her relationship with Harry), but even so your story is perfect, it gave me many moments of agony weighing on how it was going to end. In simpler terms, the experience was satisfying
| Adwan chapter 54 . 8/9
is harry ever going to act like a real brother?
| Adwan chapter 49 . 8/8
GOD! Harry is such a d*ck i want go punch his face the entitled little shit!
| IdkWhoIAm chapter 8 . 6/16
I love it! I haven’t read a better fanfic than this! The part I love the most is that even Audrey is participating in the tournament. Most harry potter’s twin fanfiction don’t put the twin in danger. I lov this!
| Roxii-n chapter 111 . 5/31
I have just finished the story and I cannot even begin to describe how much I love your writing, the characters and the story itself! You are so talented and I am so thankful that I could read this amazing piece of work!
I adored Audrey. I have never felt like I truly related to a character more; she was jealous, bitter, selfish, cared about herself and would sacrifice someone for her benefit and that’s exactly why I loved her so much. She was flawed. You have managed to write a character so alike a real person and I applaud you for that.
I also wanted to say that the way in which you wrote, it showed how much soul and love you put into the story. I have to admit, and this is me being incredibly honest, I have never read anything as extraordinary as this! Your story will forever be ingrained into my heart and my mind.
You are an amazing author, and even if you’ve finished the book a few years ago, I hope you’re well and that whatever dreams you used to have back then, will be accomplished, if they hadn’t already been, because you truly deserve it.
Thank you once more for the amazing story you’ve written for us fans of Harry Potter!
| Ryan chapter 2 . 5/27
Positives first: I love the way you wrote the story. You wrote it like a professional. The vocabulary is amazing and most of all, I am able to sense the emotion in each sentence. I am able to connect with the protagonist. Which is a really good thing, if the reader connects with the main character, the story is understood better.
Talking about the negatives: The story is nice but Harry is the only true family that Audrey has got, both of them love each other but it would be better if the brother-siste relationship was portrayed properly. The way story is going feels like Audrey likes her brother but at the same time doesn’t.
| Rin.Mikasa.Touka chapter 74 . 3/23
Ok I’ve been reading 74 chapters of this and can someone please tell me if Audrey finally uses her wand properly? I don’t want to get my hopes up-I’m sick and tired of her being so unable to use her wand/magic.
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/17
she is annoying. thats it. nothing else. annoying. she is not good at anything besides as far as we know, potions, and even then shes not even trying. she isnt good at wandwork cuz she has to be loyal to her brother which is complete bullshit because why would the suppressed twin sister of one of the most famous people in magical britian want to be loyal to someone whos just been given life on a silver platter.
| acowles02 chapter 6 . 3/17
The fact that she has to be “loyal to her nest” to make her wand work just puts me off. Of course she’s going to hate her home. She gets abused in it. She’s also going to be jealous or at least disconcerted at harry since he’s basically been the “better” potter all their lives.
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/22
i love that the romance is developing slowly! and i love audrey as well, she's so relatable and just like me 33
| Anon chapter 111 . 12/26/2022
Ah, I’ve been slowly rereading this fic the last few months and had to leave a review to reiterate how much I enjoy it. I first read your story a few years ago, and it’s one that’s stayed with me. I hope you’ve gone on to write more. Thank you, once again, for your creativity and sharing this story and creating the magnificent original character that is Audrey Potter.
| Beeccaaa chapter 1 . 11/9/2022
This story has easily become the most fascinating and original FanFiction story I’ve ever read, I absolutely loved it. Thank you for the laughs (and tears) I don’t wanna leave any spoilers so I won’t go into detail about how sad I am about certain characters endings but if you know you know
| missnoirpotter chapter 111 . 9/29/2022
My favourite story. You have given me three sleepless nights to finish it, simply because I could not put it down. I adore you, thank you for your work.
| kami37 chapter 1 . 9/8/2022
I’m back to reread this for the 4th or 5th time (can’t remember) and I can’t express enough how much I love it. Audrey is such a relatable character and the fact that the author did not make her flawless and perfect is making her more realistic. This is the only Draco fanfic I will ever read. The others would not simply compare