Reviews for Green Eyed Monster
Guest chapter 2 . 3/18
Laughing because you're asking if the fix has a chance and seeing that it has 1.4million words. I think it survived!
sigma chapter 49 . 1/28
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Guest chapter 111 . 1/7
This story was a 10/10 truly perfect and amazing.

Plz post it on ao3 your writing is fantastic
Lucinda chapter 111 . 9/28/2024
NOOO! It can't end right now! Why?! Why?!
PS: Your writing style is awesome. I hope you write more Audrey Potter books. Or any more books actually. Maybe not even fanfics, just novels? Seriously, I wish that the book could be longer. I love how it all ends. Audrey's magic gone is a bit sad, but it shows that it wasn't about her magic from the beginning, it was about the end, where everything sorts itself out. I'll miss Audrey Potter, and Harry too.
Lucinda chapter 101 . 9/28/2024
Aw, they get caught. But on the very bright side, they are going to Malfoy Manor, and Audrey will be reunited with her significant other
Lucinda chapter 91 . 8/24/2024
Oh god! Audrey! That was careless! We're in the middle of a war, people!
Lucinda chapter 85 . 8/24/2024
So... in other words Audrey Potter is using herself as a bait? Ok... Yeah I kinda understand, if she went with the Golden Trio then you would have to copy a lot from JKR's original version. And, as Sirius was so kindly suggesting, Harry, Hermione and Ron do get captured... In the Malfoy Manor. And that's when Drea and Draco have an encounter and Drea saves the Golden Trio.
Nice.
Thumbs up!
stlmoonlight chapter 110 . 7/2/2024
I just finished my third re-read of this story. GEM is my all-time favorite fic across all fandoms, and I love coming back to it every couple of years. I love Audrey and the way her and Draco’s relationship unfolds. I also LIVE for her relationship with Snape—it’s complicated but skillfully written.
It’s funny (tragic?) that I can never remember who kills Circe, so it’s always a big reveal. I can never remember the exact details of the final reveal where Audrey loses her magic, so the whole story I try to puzzle it together again. But there are so many scenes that I remember clearly and look forward to: Audrey speaking to Draco while on Veritaserum, the Belladonna/Sectumseptra scene, Audrey’s heartbreaking talk with the Bloody Baron.
It’s always broken my heart that Audrey loses her magic at the end, but I think the tragedy of it and feeling her loss myself made this story stick with me all the more. GEM has never been a story that lent itself to instant gratification or bow-tie endings.
Well, until next time…
bechilldarling chapter 111 . 2/7/2024
Omg I found this story and I loved every. single. second!
Opera123 chapter 111 . 10/5/2023
amazing story thank you for sharing your gift with others
Leosilver chapter 111 . 8/27/2023
And we've reached the end. I must say I LOVED your story, I really liked the way you played Audrey. And despite minor reservations such as her relationship with Harry, which practically did not exote , I understand that they are people with opposite personalities with different houses z but both are still brothers and the two seem to only remember that at 45 of the second t, it was only at the very end that they started to act like brothers, especially Harry (Which was a bit disappointing, Audrey's relationship with her friends was much more developed than her relationship with Harry), but even so your story is perfect, it gave me many moments of agony weighing on how it was going to end. In simpler terms, the experience was satisfying
Adwan chapter 54 . 8/9/2023
is harry ever going to act like a real brother?
Adwan chapter 49 . 8/8/2023
GOD! Harry is such a d*ck i want go punch his face the entitled little shit!
IdkWhoIAm chapter 8 . 6/16/2023
I love it! I haven’t read a better fanfic than this! The part I love the most is that even Audrey is participating in the tournament. Most harry potter’s twin fanfiction don’t put the twin in danger. I lov this!
Roxii-n chapter 111 . 5/31/2023
I have just finished the story and I cannot even begin to describe how much I love your writing, the characters and the story itself! You are so talented and I am so thankful that I could read this amazing piece of work!

I adored Audrey. I have never felt like I truly related to a character more; she was jealous, bitter, selfish, cared about herself and would sacrifice someone for her benefit and that’s exactly why I loved her so much. She was flawed. You have managed to write a character so alike a real person and I applaud you for that.

I also wanted to say that the way in which you wrote, it showed how much soul and love you put into the story. I have to admit, and this is me being incredibly honest, I have never read anything as extraordinary as this! Your story will forever be ingrained into my heart and my mind.

You are an amazing author, and even if you’ve finished the book a few years ago, I hope you’re well and that whatever dreams you used to have back then, will be accomplished, if they hadn’t already been, because you truly deserve it.

Thank you once more for the amazing story you’ve written for us fans of Harry Potter!
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