|Reviews for Further Fan Fiction Follies|
| Cu Chilainn chapter 31 . 3/21
Well I have enjoyed your jingles and rhymes I will demonstrate a genuine ode.
As early Spring soft footed rambles
amid Lent lillies and morning dew,
stormy winds and latent snow fall
try to make Winter start anew.
when Mrs Jones taught m
My Spring cleaning's just begun,
but already I have lost my way.
belated snow has frozen laundry,
and robin has come back to play.
four, four, four and two an ode should be
There are few exceptions to this rule.
And I never dared to disobey
Whem Mrs Jones taught me in school.
But those of you with eagle eyes will my major error note.
In iambic pentameter is the way an ode is wrote.
Mrs Jones would have something to say about more than poetry style - I haven't had time to read all of thses - I w
| Cu Chilainn chapter 4 . 3/21
yeah, still waiting for last of a triligy
| Cu Chilainn chapter 3 . 3/21
This is a problem I don't often see,
how it occurs mistifyses me.
| Cu Chilainn chapter 2 . 3/21
God gave the apostrope
to us in Yorks or Lancashire.
It desorates our daily speech
and 'though teschers try to teach
correct use of the little tic
our own version we would pick,
and 'appen it will suit us fine,
to speak in dialect divine,
'though mudt admit, it's better by far
to follow a more grammatical star.
| Cu Chilainn chapter 1 . 3/21
I wasn't too bad at grammar at school,
though one or two teachers thought me a fool
but often, when in a hurry I'd write,
it was possible that I might
slip up in what spelling to use,
and some old teacher would blow a fuse
so thank for this timely advice,
with their, there and thry're I will be wise.
| Gottahavemyncis chapter 31 . 3/20
| TnJAGAz chapter 31 . 3/20
Very true and hopefully never have taken you to
task of any grammar things. PM is the best
[and nicest] thing to do. Thanks from one
harried writer to another.
| alix33 chapter 31 . 3/20
| Gottahavemyncis chapter 30 . 7/31/2017
How wonderful to see your name in my inbox - and to read your latest 'Ode'. Hope all is well, loved this installment and do look forward to more...when you have time, of course.
| DS2010 chapter 30 . 7/31/2017
Love this one
| DS2010 chapter 19 . 7/31/2017
That is so true and folks need to check their posting. To many stories end up with funky code and formatting...
| DS2010 chapter 16 . 7/31/2017
That is so true what you said. If you don't like something, there is no need to rant on the author, just move on, it is almost a form of bullying to be so cruel to people who put hard work into their written stories.
| DS2010 chapter 13 . 7/31/2017
That for the grammar lesson's on Bear and Bare people tend to forget these simple rules.
| DS2010 chapter 12 . 7/31/2017
Love the odes
| TnJAGAz chapter 30 . 7/31/2017