|Reviews for A Tale of Two Dots|
| SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Simply Darling. _
| sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
sequel to this story please i love it cant wait to read more
| momocolady chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
| Lady Babette chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Love this so much. It was very sweet. Sevie is awesome.
| Shyfire chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
First, let me say that I found this story very sweet. That's a compliment.
One thing did bug me, though. "Hansom". A hansom is a type of carriage with two wheels. To describe a person's looks, you want "handsome", pronounced the exact same way. It's one thing for little Sevie (so cute!) to 'spell' it that way when talking; Harry's speech at least should have the proper spelling.
Thanky you for the story and your time.
| Sanity and Katlin chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Awww... That was just too cute!
The only thing that could posibly make it better would be an epiloge of there family... even a short one. But of course you don't have to.
| egwolf65 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
| Valenti1965 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Oh wow..great story...totally adored this one! x
| Rori Potter chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
| KrissyNightwish17 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I'm really impressed. Your story is so beautiful. You really have a talent in describing cute children. Just awesome and great. Thanks!
| Evelyn-the-wiccan chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
| Sliver of Melody chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
| Nightlock22137 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
awwwh ! flipping cute ! i love sevie ! he was so cute !
| sm1982 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Keep up the great work.
Would be great if this was a multi-chaptered fic.
| workingsomecoffeemagic chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Aaawww, this was a pure joy to read! So sweet!