Reviews for A Tale of Two Dots
Raven Salazar Potter-Black chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
... I'm speechless. This is the most amazing, perfect, heartfelt snarry I have ever read. Please make a sequel! I just can't describe how this made me feel. It warmed my heart, made me laugh, and got me aroused, sometimes all at the same time. This, I have to say, is your best story, and I have read nearly all of them. ( but only the harry potter ones! )
Akkochan chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Awwww, little Sevie's just to cute:)
Planning their future family already without them
Ghetto Rat chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! thats all there is too itt! eeeeee! lol
Lynn92 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Ahhww I absolutely LOVE Sevie! He is soooo cute! Please sequel!
Nightscurse chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Aw...I've read this story quite a few times along with a lot of your other ones! They're just so good and cute!
Bean-04 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
I love this story, Sevie is exceedingly cute.

It would be nice to know why harry trusts severus and why he knows the way to his quarters but neither is really important to the fic so I don't mind the omission.

One thing I would like to point out is that Harry never actually takes the potion to get rid of the horcrux in him.

However none of that spoils my enjoyment of this fic, so WELL DONE. :)
ASkyie chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
Little Sevvie is adorable.
sarahsezlove chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Awwww...little Sevvie is adorable.
animelvr23 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Awwwwh and Sevie is so precious!

ja ne!~
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Simply Darling. _
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
sequel to this story please i love it cant wait to read more
momocolady chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
good story
Lady Babette chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Love this so much. It was very sweet. Sevie is awesome.
Shyfire chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
First, let me say that I found this story very sweet. That's a compliment.

One thing did bug me, though. "Hansom". A hansom is a type of carriage with two wheels. To describe a person's looks, you want "handsome", pronounced the exact same way. It's one thing for little Sevie (so cute!) to 'spell' it that way when talking; Harry's speech at least should have the proper spelling.

Thanky you for the story and your time.
Sanity and Katlin chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Awww... That was just too cute!

The only thing that could posibly make it better would be an epiloge of there family... even a short one. But of course you don't have to.

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