Reviews for A Tale of Two Dots
momocolady chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
good story
Lady Babette chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Love this so much. It was very sweet. Sevie is awesome.
Shyfire chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
First, let me say that I found this story very sweet. That's a compliment.

One thing did bug me, though. "Hansom". A hansom is a type of carriage with two wheels. To describe a person's looks, you want "handsome", pronounced the exact same way. It's one thing for little Sevie (so cute!) to 'spell' it that way when talking; Harry's speech at least should have the proper spelling.

Thanky you for the story and your time.
Sanity and Katlin chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Awww... That was just too cute!

The only thing that could posibly make it better would be an epiloge of there family... even a short one. But of course you don't have to.

Sanity
egwolf65 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
sooo good!
Valenti1965 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Oh wow..great story...totally adored this one! x
Rori Potter chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Interesting story.
KrissyNightwish17 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I'm really impressed. Your story is so beautiful. You really have a talent in describing cute children. Just awesome and great. Thanks!
A Smouldering Soul chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Loved it!
Sliver of Melody chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Totally awesome!
kimberly22137 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
awwwh ! flipping cute ! i love sevie ! he was so cute !
sm1982 chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Beautifully written.

Keep up the great work.

Would be great if this was a multi-chaptered fic.

SM
workingsomecoffeemagic chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Aaawww, this was a pure joy to read! So sweet!
scorpionika chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Awwwww xD

I mean, by my standards it all happened waaay too fast (my stadards lifelong friendship 5 to 10 years of living together before "I do" :) but, considering it's your snarry story - I love it .

Hugs!
SamHAS chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Very sweet and unexpected.
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