Reviews for Eye of the Beholder
Solvdrage chapter 2 . 10/8/2014
Well, color me intrigued. You've definitely captured my attention. Looking forward to an update!
Gaiseric chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
An interesting start but given the little bit that I've read it seems like an interesting premise. The unfortunate thing is that with so little of it I have no idea where it's going or what the potential line the story will take is.

But still, not bad. Looking forward to more and hoping that it doesn't get left behind like so many fics seem to these days.
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Holy f $#!...You are evil and that is sooooo screwed up...He BECAME Itachi!...man, that is freaky!...Please update soon.
Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
neat idea, and very well executed. im curious if you intend to take it further.
jeanpaulreddy93 chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
Awesome story! Update soon...
Veldrisk chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
Like the story so far. Look forward to the next chapter.
Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
Huh? You know if your gonna turn him into a schizophrenic and lead onto it with half-sentences you CANNOT stop at 2 chapters.. You can't expect glowing reviews when you leave your readers scratching their heads wondering exactly what your trying to get across... I mean the operations.. Why?.. Hinata being there... Why?... His head being messed up...Why?... Him even being scared of it...Why?.. I don't mind the concept and I realize you were TRYING to build suspense.. but that only works when you reveal a few things and make people wonder about the stuff your still hiding.. As it is?.. You've got a TON of question marks.. And NO answers... It's ALMOST as bad as the "reveal" type chapters when your given SO MANY answers that it's a series finale... If this is the set up?... Then that should have happened chapter 1. A lead up?.. Then the operating table is cool, but the mindset thing was too much to add in IF you weren't gonna explain the operation thing.. The Hinata?... I... Have no idea... Tsunade?.. Shizune?.. Those I could see, they were (presumably) the ones "operating" on him... Hell even Sakura, since she's Tsunade's apprentice too.. But Hinata's kinda outta left field.. Not A BAD thing, IF she's there for emotional support, but as is?... As I said before.. It leaves me saying... "huh"?
McCabeRz chapter 2 . 5/21/2012
I liked the plot but WHY THE FUCK IS HE CRYING!
Selonianth chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
I'm pretty sure that no amount of itachi's chakra could do this... but ok.
Gaiseric chapter 2 . 10/5/2011
This shows some real promise, and I hope to see more of it in the future. Please don't let it fall to the wayside.
ShinobiTwin05 chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
Wow... O_o Poor Naruto...
ElementalMaster16 chapter 2 . 9/30/2011
pretty good, can't wait to see more of the changes.

update soon (_)
Blacksword Zero chapter 2 . 8/27/2011
Interesting.
Akira Stridder chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
woow another story!
Reishin Amara chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
Ok,im still wondering what Itachi gave him...was it Mangekyou?

Or should i go random and say Geass XD?
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