Reviews for Runaway
chaotic-iak chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Great, you expressed Finlay's and others' characters nicely. I feel like I'm watching the movie of this fic and also feeling it. A great work! Only there are some mistakes, the most noticeable is that Finlay was spelled Finaly in some context, and that Pokemon is capitalized. Maybe fix them? The insides -the plot, characters, etc- are great; it's bad if the outsides -the spelling, formatting, etc- are bad. Anyway, nice fic, and I'm looking for your next chapter.
J4yJ4ys3z chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Wow Finlay's life must suck. A mean mom and annoying rivals. Anyway please continue. :D