|Reviews for Death Cycle|
| Licoriceallsorts chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Well, you seem like an author to me. You're fluent in your chosen language and inventive with it (loved the mystery evoked by the database section - who is Hikou Shinohara, and who is looking her up, and why?), your characterisation, dialogue, pacing, description, all better than 90% of what gets posted here. I am really hoping this isn't a one-shot because it feels like a beginning of something original and interesting, and I'm intrigued both by the Shinohara mystery and about what happens to our accident victim.
Thanks for posting.