Reviews for Proving She's a Woman
riversongspoilers chapter 1 . 4/3
That was amazing, verry hot and I loved the ending xxx
Therese chapter 1 . 2/28
Good. :) would have been cute if they fell asleep together for once though
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
So SO hot!
AEK chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I enjoyed it. Very nice
IShipItAllAndThenSome chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Oh, my Rassilion... Your first time writing smut?
Just me chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Well written smut :-P, definitely a couple miles away from the now relative chastity of your other fic! But good
wibbly chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
This is fantastic. And hot. I love how you handle the Doctor and River. You have them both spot on. Particularly the dialogue, the DIALOGUE — the banter, the flirting, their entire relationship. Love it. Plus, your writing style flows. Also liked the humour included in this, their interaction in the closet and whatnot.

Only thing that I found off was in the sentence, "River tore his shirt open and raked her nails from his collarbone down to the musculature of his pelvis." The "musculature of his pelvis" was a bit jarring, it's an overkill of more technical terms that just doesn't fit with the rest of the sentence. And the paragraph with the whole metaphor of them "battling for control", the mention of "trenches" and "ditches" put me off a little, mostly because they were kissing and the images didn't fit well together.

Other than that, I LOVED this. Thanks so much for writing this! :)
fishxcustard chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
he he I love it! You should write more fics like this...
connielea chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Yummy yummy yum yum
Eryn chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
I really liked where you went with this story, but I do have one small comment. Your paragraph about the ditch and trenches was jarring and out of character for the rest of your work. Well done otherwise, though. Keep writing!
dsmamarose chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Wonderful!
Iwait4theRain chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
I don't think I can be considered a prude anymore after reading this...WIN! Haha, so this was AWESOME! It's so different from all the other one-shots that you've written! I really liked it, you write smut very well. And, I have to say, you have got these characters' personalities down COLD. It's totally not out of character at all and I congratulate you!
Winnywriter chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
*falls off the edge of the bed*

Brilliant! Loved it...
Haze chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
So sweet, love river in this
Cassie chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
I'm glad you;ve done an m rated one! I've been waiting for ages for you to put it up after you mentioned doing one on the stars just blink for us :D hope you do more
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