|Reviews for Hanging Offense|
| Purple Bubble Patch Coffee chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Darn. You left it hanging! ,
I personally love this story of yours! Seriously...
Great job :D
| MarthLover298 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
pleze make a second! pleze!
| wordfiend chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Thanks for sharing this lovely piece. It was touching without being melodramatic and very well written. Kid's voice came across beautifully. Awesome job!
| KidxMaka4eva chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
AAA! I loved it so so so so so so so so muchhh!, i have goosebumps! xxx
| TaShYrEi chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I have mentioned I haven't had the non-laziness to actually read the manga, but I DO know this was based on the manga, or at least loosely based on it, if I'm not wrong. The not-laying-a-finger-on-Maka line-which was a line so sublime and could be very well expanded into something as concrete as this. Ohkubo should realize how we all are craving for a little more exploration into their possibilities.
And back to this, you are. Such. A. Tease. But it's a good kind of tease, you know? And the wishful person in me wants to think it could've had a good kind of ending, where Maka is only slightly (severely) injured, and Kid comes to the rescue, and yadda yadda. But then again, all the guilt and angst-ing would work better if something fatal happened. (But no, I still hate deathfics, haha.)
P.S. KIDnapped. Hoho. Good one. ;P
Awesome job! :D
| LittleMissSophie chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Very cute, and very in character :)
| SerenadeInTheMoonlight chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Too lazy to login, maybe later.
But this is AMAZING! You need to write so much more in every single category, just so we could read everything by you. 3 you Wibble.