Ooh,now I wanna see that chapter two!

This is hilarious!

.god...this..this...this is just perfect... please make a sequel

Dead brb. That was amazing, what you need to do is make a sequel my dear author. I was reading this at 3:30

Oh my god, i read this when i was younger and didn't know any better... Now i see how absolutely ridiculous the numbers are... Please fix them! The heart rate for athletes are slower than normal people cuz their bodies are more efficent in getting the oxygen they need because of frequent exercising. They should have 60-65 as a resting heart rate. And i don,t know about the 38 beats per second thing... Was that a typo? Cuz it would make more sense if it was per minute. If it was intentional, wouldn't being half-ghost mean you're kind of half dead so your heart rate could be unusually slow?
I love this fic, the numbers are just so wrong i can't quite enjoy it anymore ;-;

49 degrees Celsius is not normal
Not at all

omg sequel please lol

He's HALF dead

yeah funny story, but please research body temp. 49C an you are dead! 37 are normal and 42 would be a veeeeeeeeeeeery high fever! at 49 you are dead

This definitely needs to be continued... XD It's great!

Oh my god! I get that its a one shot but this seriously needs more chapters

I'm dying, please tell me your going to make a sequel or something this was priceless.

I have come back to read this story a bazillion times. And I Wil keep doing so. This story is freaking AWESOME!

Awesomenessssssss. Pure awesomeness. Great work

omfg this is perfect