Reviews for The Perfect Bun
Onedayoutthere chapter 1 . 4/15
This is great, I think you portraiyed Minerva really well!
Ferm chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
I loved minerva..

but when she displayed the gryff-slytherin bias by sending them down, I lost all respect for her.

This story was a good piece nevertheless
TakeASmile chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
You kind of take my breath away ? I'm such a mess right now.
I've always loved Minerva and Harry relationship, and yeah, to me McGonagall is like the best character ever (i've a -little- obsession with her) and wow, you've painted it so well.
I'm very impressed, and i don't even know what to say anymore ? This is beyond words, truly.
Thanks for sharing, and sorry about any english mistakes ( i'm french, and my english kinda sucks oops)
LilithL2 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
beautiful story.
congratulations! ;)
imkerfuffled chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Awwwww! Its so sad, but it made me smile, and it's happy and inspirational as well, and I don't even how that's possible, but this is amazing! I think I'm gonna cry :')
That last line... :D awwwww
Anini mouse chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
earlyable chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
I can't even find the words to describe how utterly amazing this story is.
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Millicent Bulstrode is there? I thought she'd kicked all those nasty Slytherins out, or (per movie) left them buried under rubble in the dungeon. Surprised Minerva doesn't get up and kick Millicent back out, just to make sure.

But then, she made a Gryffindor laugh. I suppose that's good enoug to let her stay.

Lovely triumph. I'm sure she must be happy she's defended the castle so well, especially against a Headmaster that she was so proud to drive from the castle.

But this is a happy story. What a pity that some who gave so much for this happiness can't even be mentioned.
LovelyLadyMindings chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow, I feel like you captured Maggie Smith's McGonagall perfectly. Amazing.
kneelinfrontofthequeen chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Thank you so much for writing the piece, I've been always wondering what happened right after the battle, and you helped me with this) Loved Potter hugging her at last, like he was fighting desire to embrace her for previous 7 years)

*but, just out of interest, wasn't Millicent sent away with others SLytherins? Anyway, I've always suspected she was kinder than other girls from her house)*
ScarletLioness chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
awww~ that was on the one hand so sad but then so cute as well :)

I just loved it.

Poppinswannabe chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
That was great! I didn't let myself read it until I went to see the last movie...didn't want to have anything given away, if you know what I mean. I've read the books but still, you never know what they leave in or take out for a movie.

I loved Maggie Smith in this...especially when she made that comment to Molly Weasley about using that spell...cracked me up!

It was great to read one of your stories again...I went on a Gilmore Girls fic re-reading the other day...missed yours. Any chance of them making a come back? ;)

Thanks for writing!

Imagen99 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Very sweet, and in character as well :) chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Hm... ja, was soll ich sagen? Eigentlich les ich ja wirklich keine Minerva-stories, aber diese hier war ja schließlich keine seltsame Romanze, sondern ein Einblick in ihre Gefühle direkt nach der Schlacht, und darum fand ich's schon gut. Man muss bedenken, dass die Frau... wie alt? ... fast 80 Jahre alt ist und die ganze Zeit an vorderster Front mitgekämpft hat, gegen die schlimmsten der Todesser sogar. Außerdem war sie ja sowieso schon fix und fertig von dem vorhergegangenen, schlimmen Jahr mit all den Sorgen und Ängsten. Und dann steht sie vor den Trümmern ihres Zuhauses (das ist es ja wohl) und vor den vielen Toten und den Trauernden und den Traumatisierten, und irgendwie scheint man jetzt von ihr zu erwarten, als erste aufzustehen und die hundert und aberhundert Aufgaben zu koordinieren. Sie, als alte, müde gekämpfte, selbst trauernde Frau. Dass sie da nun wirklich mal einen Moment nicht an den perfekten Look denkt, ist schon klar. Sogar so eine beherrschte Frau muss mal einen Moment nachgeben und einfach fertig sein. Aber dann hängen zu viele Seelen und zu viele organisatorische Dinge von ihr ab, und schon rafft sie sich wieder auf. Muss ja. Das ist schon bisschen tragedy.

(He, ich bin zwar keine 80, aber ich kann mich im Moment ganz gut in sie hinein versetzen. Im Kleinen, natürlich).
bexypants chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
That... That was beautiful. I'm in tears right now, actually. Very well written and that ending was just amazing. I love the Minerva/Harry relationship and I think you got it just right. Not too overly emotional and sappy, but that hug just shows how much mutual admiration they have for one another.

(Sorry if this is incoherent, I'm waaaayy to tired for my own good right now and emotional over the beauty of this story.)

This story was superbly well done (:
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