|Reviews for s e p e r a t e|
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
The format is, um. But it works.
| Tigrette-of-Fire chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I think that was great! You're a great writer!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Downright fucking awesome. Your work has an inherent rhythm and meter to it, and the way you play with the text to control the mood makes for a really fun read.
| Cheese chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I'm not one for poems but I recognized your name and decided to read. Glad I did. I think you displayed their relationship quite well.
| LittleMissSophie chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
*raises hand* I like shirlulu, and I thought this was adorable. Although it's just used as a frame, it feels more shirlulu than nanalulu. That's just me :)
| Solider of Lucifer chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
That was nice
| Hideout Writer chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
That was a bit different than I was truly prepared for...but it's not bad by my standards. (I do have exacting standards)
I'd say this took it's place as a highsix-lowseven on my scale.
Nothing has ever hit a ten, though I've seen some fics hit 0. THAT's bad.
Something I do when reading fics with reviews is check the reviews, and see what the other readers have to say. Usually, they are right, and I've ignored some seriously bad fics based off of reviews.
I'm not a poet, so I'm not really authorized to cast judgement, but it definitely seems stable.