Please update story

I like the love scene and how you brought Mizore into the equation. My only suggestion would be to soften up Tsukune a little. So far, he's so uber powerful that it's almost coming off Gary-Stu. Good writing overall.

As far as Galen - Grandson of Galactcus goes, he hates soldiers, period. I tried talking to him, but he just went off how I needed to die, get shot in my uterus, and be ashamed of serving Obama when I told him I didn't even vote for him. He was talking nonsense and he just became belligerent, so there was no need in exchanging any kind of conversation with him anymore.

By the way, he has no idea what I feel for my fellow Americans. I was there to help rebuild after Katrina and Rita hit Mississippi and Louisiana, assisted in protecting our boarder in Del Rio and Eagle Pass against drug and human traffickers, I went to war in 04-05, 08-09, and I came back and assisted the North East when Sandy hit.

He just likes to talk without knowing the facts.

Your Mistress.

For the record although I like the story I have lost respect for that bitch Mistress as she serves willingly for the tyrant Obama.

Not too mention she blocked me when I asked albet harshly about us little folk suffering under his rule.

She doesn't care about any of us.

Great story! I hope you add next soon.

nice chapter, hope you don't take so much time to update this time

That was absolutely AWESOME. I love Those two (Shade and Ageha san) react especially when it come to Tsukune, hehe. Mumu-chan really caught herself a live one. Ah the arrogance sometimes, Hey it's your funeral my boy, sorry mumu-chan. "Thump" umm auntie are you ok? Love how things turn on their heels at times. That was one of the better chapters all around. Well I guess fun time is over, now for a bit of action with the two troublemakers. But not after "I do hope" Tsukune can make Mizore happy.

Well I like it. Matches up to the one where he ends pissed at her.

It's great to see Mrs. Aono confront both Moka's like that. Even Ura showed some bit of restraint at her refusal to even feel concerned at nothing the full scope of the situation.
I do hope this continues with the same intensity,
I can only wonder what is next, until Tsukune gets to the Bonding Party. Might he politely tell Issa san. "I have no need for you or your daughters or for that matter any other Vampire. And if you value your life and anyone else you care for you'll forget I ever existed. Otherwise i will not be so kind as to give you the same choice you gave my granfather the Previous Mozaku King." I can hardly wait to see how you handle the that meeting or even Akashiya san. The mind boggles.

I'm glad to see a new chapter. It's always nice reading at good story with Tsukune having a spine.

Aono Kasumi is so awesome in this chapter! I love her strength and courage in confronting Moka. I really hope that you keep writing because you have a nice narrative going here, even though I am not so sure about an over-powered Tsukune. It's your story; write it as you see fit. People will either like to read or not, but as long as you are happy with what you post, that's all that matters. Cheers!

Heh, poor, poor, Moka... Hmm, anyways, I do hope that he doesn't get it on with Kurumu's mom and aunt, because honestly I hate them both xD, but it is your story, so please do as you wish

Otherwise, some screwed up punctuation, and spelling as well (uru-chan? xP). Oh, and, I'm sorry to so arrogantly claim this but, might you stop giving the break-up explanation over and over? It's pretty tiring by this point...

See ya next chapitre!

-Ran

great chapter I was waiting to see the confrontation between those two.

Even though I don't like the "Get What You Wanted" story in the first place, I'm definitely intrigued with these turn of events. Tsukune is now being a total boss and the suspense of Kasumi's reaction towards Moka is now killing me. I hope you continue this story.

i look forword to the rest of your story.

hey Eternal Fire, you may want to consider moving your lemon fics to either adultfanfiction . net, or mediaminer . org, b/c the people in charge of this site are probably getting ready to get rid the fics with lemons in them at some point soon