Reviews for Coming into his Own |
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![]() ![]() Good so far, hope to see more ofthis story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hrmmm not too bad. I feel that Tsukune's personality has detoured a bit too much (feels more OC). Somehow I think he might have waited a bit longer before consumating with Kurumu... at the very least to not make her seem like the rebound. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope to see this story updated soon like your vision on this story so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a good story and well written. now I must guard what makes me a man for this chapter as scared it. sincerly bloodyemperor |
![]() ![]() ![]() whats up my friend i love your story and cant wait for your next update soon. well i love to see how tsukune's mom is going to treat moka but will she give up her sons location or maybe not tell her at all but how will mokas family react to the divorce. moka is one of my favorite people but right now i hate her because of your good story wounder what will happen next time. maybe he will see the others and try to be with ruby as well and the little witch too hears hopeing later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. |
![]() ![]() actually you did screw the names up. Outer moka is called omote not ototo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good storie this my 5th time reading it. and 20 spin off on 3 i like so far. I read the manga and watched the anime and moka is selffish on both ( inner/outer), but has the sweet act down. pluse i dis like pink, but charter i like have pink hair LOL.. keep up the great storie/ fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your slant on things. I'm always amazed that such engaging work can come not only from the original work, but from equally if not more amazing variants. Keep up the great effort! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And here I was hoping he would make Issa andfamily his slave, while taking back his ancestor's throne. Oh well, hope to read more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have always loved this story line and you are doing an awesome job, the interaction with Kurumu and the rest of Moka's family is always good too for any ideas you might need :). Anyway I hope you have the next chap up sooner too but I will be still read no matter what. Thanks for writing! ~Fraggle |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute chapter and I must say I like the chemistry you have for Kurumu and Tsukune. It's very touching and beautiful. Good Work. Your Mistress. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really nice work here. I absolutely love the interaction with Shade and Ageha. Ageha's history with her husband was sad but very cute and endearing. Amazing writing. Your Mistress. |