This is the most amazing and awsome story iv read on this site. Just the first chapter alone sets a precedent for the rest of the story and you have met my expectatons with this story. I only ask for longer chapters and mabye push them oyt as soon as possible. You are the ruler of this site.

Hey i remember you back in the eva days. I have to say your eva fics were pretty good. Not randoml377 good but good nontheless.

Anyways, so far, im liking the different approach you're doing with the idea. Its different and i think we need more bad ass tsukune fics around. Now as for people who seem to want to tell you how to write your fic... Im pretty sure you have experence in this field but just to make sure.

Its your fic and if you want write about rsukune and the unicorn, you have every right to do so. Its YOUR fic. Man i get pissed off everytime i see reviewers think they are entitled to anything.

Personally, i would love to see a ria and tsukune

pairing but only if the mistress or lotlof attempted one.

interesting chapter and story...I love it none the less though. I wonder if Tsukune will have and yu yu hakusho powers in this story! Can already see Kuruma's powers some what with that tree stunt. Any Hei or Yusuke in there!

looking forward to more!

What is it with you awful, awful fan fic writers and your obsession with cliffhangers? :p Loving the story, I cannot wait to see where you go next. Also I like the fact that Tsukune's true nature will consume the vampiric blood within him. Sort of a fresh start. Please don't leave us hanging for too long. XD

So Tsukune's a creeper now? Heh. Anyway nice story but was REALLY hoping for a Ria/Tsukne story. There never seems to be any of those.

Another Kurumu/Tsukune fic? We have enough of these. The guy who suggested Ria/Tsukune was right, there are a group of people who want that and there is no fic for it right now and people are getting impatient and fed up.

The story is good, the plot lines are good, the pairing is overdone. The pairing could kill this story from being the freshest thing in the R&V fic for some time now. It's up to you but there will be a ton of disappointed people if it is straying the way it goes.

Great chapter. From what it sounds like, Kurumu is going to be the main girl. Glad to hear that! Update soon!

This looks like an awesome story. I've never seen this done before.

You want feedback on the names of Moka's personalities. Uru should be "Ura" and Ototo should be "Omote".

very nice, a little rushed, but i can understand that. this is like the 15th version of a story so speeding through the well known parts is very forgivable.

As for the story it's self, the angle you are taking is having me on the edge of my seat. Tsukune now has a power up, anger, and is about to kick some serious ass. And i cant even complain because the manga is taking a very similiar angle.

I just...dont want Ria to die, she is like my favorite character of all time, next to Gin... and Gin is pretty much as good as dead...so im super nervous that Ria will meet a similiar fate.

I just hope Tsukune has some amount of human blood left...or perhaps he has seen Spiderman..."with great power comes great responsibility".

Maybe Tsukune will fall in love with Ria, maybe his mazuku blood hungers for a strong mate...like Ria...

Tsukune x Ria all the way.

This is a different twist indeed. Magus, Mazoku and Vampire all rolled into one. I can just see that... Moka-Let me out, let me deal with this! *Plink* Uh, why didn't anything happen? Tsukune-GRRRRRRRR! Moka-Oh &$%#&%# PAHAHAHA Loving the twist, can't wait for more.

great story with new type of developments really like the new type of monster hope you keep writing this story can not wait till the next chapter

AWESOME! Can't wait to see Tsukune's new form and what he has planned for Issa and Ria. This is probably one of my top favorite spinoffs of Get What you Wanted. Keep up the great work and update soon!

this is sooooooooooo good.

O.O HAHAHAHAHA, each of the other stories, I wished that Tsukune would hold Gin up off the ground and take away his...cockiness. I like the thought that there may be more to Tsukune, that would further drive the nail into Moka. Especially if Tsukune's heritage is of some importance...IE not like an emperor of all yokai, but maybe the heir to an aristocratic family. So that he has some sort of influence and it all comes back to Moka and of course have someone (or a harem XD ) there to rub her face in it. Either way looking forward to the direction you take your story.

another copy of the masterpeice, and like most of the others- its really good, and i like the angle you are taking. I wish i could leave a bigger review- but i have read it before, like 15 times. I will be looking for updates reguardless. You have skill, and you are working with a beautiful story- you can't go wrong. Good luck.