Reviews for Coming into his Own
SuperFireman151 chapter 16 . 4/17/2018
Will never know unless ya get up off your ass and update
Nest chapter chapter 16 . 4/11/2018
Next Chapter?
Leefa chapter 16 . 11/22/2017
OMG! It was getting to the most amazing part. Such a great story.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/22/2017
Dude were all waiting, How long? Anyway besides the delay I Love the Direction you took with the story, So Keep it up.
Gold Testament chapter 16 . 11/22/2017
ETERNAL FIRE! *Points a plaster at you and freezes you* You're now Eternal Frozen for this. 16 epic and romance filled chapters, and yet nothing new for years.
Gold Testament chapter 15 . 11/22/2017
Tsurara is lucky she's a snow maiden as well otherwise Mizore would freeze her for a while as punishment for the jokes at her expense.
Gold Testament chapter 14 . 11/22/2017
Hehehehehe Moka's going to be in deeper trouble if she reunites with old friends.
Gold Testament chapter 12 . 11/22/2017
BOOM! DOUBLE K.O.!
Gold Testament chapter 11 . 11/22/2017
Uru Moka will still screw it up because of her arrogance and pride. Their acting like a vampire pushed away the love of their life, and got Gin neutered in one of the most painful ways.
Gold Testament chapter 6 . 11/22/2017
After kissing and making up and out with Kurumu it's off to reconnect with the others as well.
Gold Testament chapter 5 . 11/22/2017
Wait till Moka finds out he's no longer a vampire, but is descended from the TRUE ruler of all yokai. Even Ura Moka may be disgusted with the cowardice of her father and the elders.
Gold Testament chapter 4 . 11/22/2017
Oh I can't wait for Issa and Akasha to learn the past comes back to Haunt the entire vampire race.
Demon Eyes Laharl chapter 16 . 9/10/2017
The whole storyline with Moka cuckolding Tsukune is very entertaining. I really like your take on it. However, this story needs a good polish. Mostly on the Dialogue. They feel stilted and unnatural. Mostly because they feel like exposition rather than an exploration between people. Too many details in the speech itself. It would flow much better if you allowed the characters to prod each other, letting them discover the meaning of each other's words. This is particularly obvious during his talk with Kurumu.

To be fair, your improving on that regard, especially in the later chapters. I hope you can update this one. It's far more lighthearted and a welcome addition to the other stories that use this story concept.
TheGreatLord chapter 16 . 9/7/2017
Can you please update this?
Guest chapter 16 . 8/30/2017
Mah boi...This is the best damned story I have ever read
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