|Reviews for Jack|
| MissHarper778 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Ok, so this is going to be an "exhaustive" review! I'm commenting on it as I read...hope that's all right...
Btw, Pintel's comments are in quotations! ;)
"Best at it? Best at wot? Best at makin' sure a couple o' inanimate object don' go driftin' off on their own? A monkey could do it…"
I love this ! ;) And I love the game they were playing...
So that's why Ragetti and Pintel always 'mind the boat'? Interesting!
"Are ye callin' me an ol' cutthroat? 'Ey, now, I've mended my ways, I 'ave! :P"
"Stocky? Well, yea, I guess I is that..."
The normal reviewer's back now, Pintel...ahem!
Poor Ragetti! He is a grown man! Pint ought to treat him like one. I gather he's not willing to accept that his nephew is grown, though I'm sure it's mostly because he feels so responsible for his well-being.
Awkward 'bout Ragetti going to the bathroom! :P I like most of this story, though. Deep character development is my favourite!
Poor Ragetti! Ugh, it must make his skin crawl to see his eye being bitten...
My review will continue later! Unfortunately, I have other duties besides me reviewin', writin', etc. I've got to go...mind the boat! ;)
| InkPoisoning chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
I'm sorry, I couldn't help myself. This one made me laugh... out loud. Loudly.
| FloatingPizza chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Excellent once more! I actually believe I like this story better than your previous one, which is no mean feat. The same words I wrote there apply here as well, but again I want to draw emphasis onto your skills of characterization. Brilliant! Every single word and every accent mark were darn near perfect- not to mention the relative lack of dialouge, in the case of Jack! Faving again :)