|Reviews for A Few More Points|
| Realariel chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
You kinda broke my heart as well :( Very well written, even though my Hawke is not exactly like yours (which is natural), I believed it, and Varric was great. Thank you for writing it.
| Nichalia chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Ahh this was touching. Poor them!
| mille libri chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
It's hard to get into Varric's head and make it sound right, and you've done that beautifully here. His reasoning, his reactions, all spot on.
| ExtraJuicy chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Very well written! Made me sad at the end, but I thoroughly enjoyed it, thank you!
| Kell-D chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Aww poor Hawke. *tear* I looooooooooved this!
| Devryn chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Very, very fitting. But so sad!
| KaeliRed chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Well done we need more varric x hawke love!
| Roia chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I really love this, it feels like it really fits. Sad though :(
| Havoc Hg chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
D: ...this one tricks me. It starts so fun and I love how random Qunari keep poping up in your stories but then it gets all sad and I end up all T_T. Cause Hawke/Varric makes me happy and Hawke/Varric fail makes me sad. It's good, but I'm sad. And I keep rereading it by accident! ...I need to go find H/V smut now. Or fluff. Or reread that parent one you wrote.
| The Third Biker Scholar chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
oh. oh wow...damn. very poignant, and very real. loved it.
...could there be a happy ending? surely, there are half-dwarfs running around somewhere on thedas. if you have half elven kids like feynrial (srry, can't spell that name for anything), surely there can be slightly taller than average for a dwarf hybrids?
| tulzdavampslayer chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
See now that was beautiful and sad and I need a hug. :(