Reviews for Making Amends
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
Very Nice, this seems interesting.

Next chapter?

TDH
The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
There are a few spelling errors, but this is a story that seems very intriguing.

TDH
Twilight Rose Witch chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
You need to re read both your chapters because some sentences don't make sense and some ate spelt wrong. But other than that brill chapter and does this follow any events in yu gi oh?
Twilight Rose Witch chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
This is good but Cynthia was never pregnant and didn't she die from a terminal illness. Your main character reminds me of my OC because she is also a delinquent. My story is about what if Pegasus and Cynthia had a daughter u might find it entertaining. Thanks for reading this review and please update soon.