Reviews for Because of you
Rayah19 chapter 1 . 3/23/2017
I like it
renn chapter 2 . 11/1/2014
PLEASE do more! sorry I sound stupid but U R so good!
Mazhufvgj chapter 3 . 9/10/2014
It's been over a year since you updated this story and i'm not even sure you're still here checking regularly, but i wanted to thank you for putting time and effort into this fanfic, and i really enjoyed it so far.
maiEARTHsong chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
The storyline is good, but its kinda hard to make out what's happening 'cause of the grammar :/
I love the spin on Oath Breaker though :)
ScarlettAlexandra chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
i like the plot line its just REEEAAALLY hard to understand whose talking in those paragraphs. Try indenting between speakers.
Kavazya chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I love that you're putting your own spin on Oath Breaker. It was one of my favorites, but Paver often wrote very much in third-person omniscient, so I'm excited to see your take on deeper character perspectives. Very well written - keep it up!
tanzysun chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
could u wirte on from here? i really like it and i wanna know wht happens :)
ScarlettAlexandra chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
good story line. but the whole thing is choppy and kinda confusing. but besides that good :)