|Reviews for Because of you|
| maiEARTHsong chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
The storyline is good, but its kinda hard to make out what's happening 'cause of the grammar :/
I love the spin on Oath Breaker though :)
| ScarlettAlexandra chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
i like the plot line its just REEEAAALLY hard to understand whose talking in those paragraphs. Try indenting between speakers.
| Kavazya chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I love that you're putting your own spin on Oath Breaker. It was one of my favorites, but Paver often wrote very much in third-person omniscient, so I'm excited to see your take on deeper character perspectives. Very well written - keep it up!
| tanzysun chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
could u wirte on from here? i really like it and i wanna know wht happens :)
| ScarlettAlexandra chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
good story line. but the whole thing is choppy and kinda confusing. but besides that good :)