Reviews for Through the Eyes of Charlie Bates
Kansas chapter 7 . 5/31/2013
Awwww! Dont give up! Update again!
Tentacion Prohibida chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Update soon, please!
Mononoke2012 chapter 7 . 2/7/2013
This was utter brilliance .
write more !))
Red Crayon Embassy chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
Aww, I wish there was another chapter...Sad to see this is the last one :'o(
Red Crayon Embassy chapter 3 . 9/15/2012
I love the fact you referenced the last chapter (no chairs nearby). It gave a sense of familiarity. And the way you outline Charley's goals,(a squirrel called LORN! :OD) it really paints a picture of lovely Charley.
Red Crayon Embassy chapter 2 . 9/15/2012
You need to be a comedian. Words cannot describe the hilarity of this.
Red Crayon Embassy chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
This was utter brilliance. I love you way you write as Charley, you've got his character like that! *snap*
XxdisaxX chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
hey Dodger its me, couldnt b bothered to sign in and I SHOULD (and am mind you) be doing my work right now. but still i liked this chapter even tho it wasnt the original ill never get to read :(

lol still good tho keep it up _

xXdisaXx
Wouldnt you like to know chapter 5 . 10/17/2011
I just read all your chapters, and I want to see what else you write. The last one (no offense) wasnt your best. But I loved the fourth chapter. Anyway, I hope you continue on with this :)
Rosebud5 chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
Awww Dodge no, let Charley have his girl! lol At least he didn't choke to death. I loved when Charley called him handsome...I was like yes, Dodger. Yes you are.

And you may use the puffy shirt any time;)

Rosey
XxXxdisappearingactxXxX chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
poor charlie, poor poor charlie. I know the feeling. but good chapter anywho. but as for the name... uhhh... nup cant think of one. but thats whats googles for right?

XxdisaxX
Rosebud5 chapter 3 . 8/16/2011
OMG YUS. This. Was. Hysterical. Dodger's puffy shirt reminded me of my fic "The Super Secret Diary of the Artful Dodger," in which he wears and ruins said puffy shirt. ;-D Made me giggle!

The whole thing is HYSTERICAL, me dear. PLEASE update soon!

Rosey
Rosebud5 chapter 2 . 8/11/2011
Tehehehehe this chapter was AWESOME! Brava! It made me smile:-))

Rosey
XxXxdisappearingactxXxX chapter 2 . 8/10/2011
YAY THE CHAIR INCIDENT!

im glad u remembered _

that was as funny as the last one i swear your humor is awesome. i hope more people read this just so they can laugh. bighten their day and all.

thnx from your best china plate

XxdisaxX

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XxXxdisappearingactxXxX chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Hey! I've been waiting for u to post something. And I agree when u said that there are a lot of dodger stories, I had a look for myself. Just a tinsy thing tho

You wrote 'And he feel over'. Just thought you might wanna no. But besides that I really liked it, it was amusing and I think you validated things from his point of view really well.

Yay for another story! :D

XxdisaxX
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