Reviews for Fruit from Palaven
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2
You are masterful at the one shot that leaves the reader futilely clicking the next button repeatedly. Clickclickclickclick!
Nichalia chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
O.o Wow. That was very, very hot. The differences seem to be interesting, welcome, sexy and appealing even, not an uncomfortable obstacle, for a change. I love it!
CookieRoseGirl chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
OMG this was hot! Especially towards the ending and I love Garrus. This deserves to be continued/sequel. Either way, great work. :)
HugoCogs chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Ahhhh (sigh)

After Liara/Femshep, Garrus/Femshep is my absolutely favorite paring, and stories like this remind me why. Wonderful job! Very erotic and well done without being "smutty" in a bad way.
OMhypothesis chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
...Any chance you can show us where this is going? I love it!
Renn chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Pure awesomeness. Really, that is simply genius. True that he would have to put up with a human ship's design would not be fitting...and the power flirting...loved it!
lunar47 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
loved this
Minquette chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
For something that had no sex, this was ridiculously erotic - and I don't even have an oral fixation. The characterisation of Garrus and Shepard are fantastic; I can see exactly how the dynamic has changed between them here based on knowledge from the game and I especially like Garrus' internal monologue on the differences between turian and human social signals. Loved it!
Jade R. Raven chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Really liked this story! Found this through the Bioware forums, and think it's definitely one of the more in-character Garrus stories I've ever read. :)

Off to read your other work!
Seyfert chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I really liked this story, thanks for sharing!

In the game the bit of dialogue at the end of your fiction seems to come out of the blue, and it's a bit disconcerting, especially considering that neither of them has an alien fetish, thus physical attraction is hard to justify unless there is something more. Your story provides a perfect background for it, and both Shepard and Garrus are really in character (I confess that at first I didn't like Garrus's defensive reaction when she suggests that his teeth are sharp, bur it does sound like him, especially if he's cranky because of that headache, and Shepard's reaction is exactly what I would expect from her).

Again, thanks for writing and sharing this :)
BladesoftheValkyrie chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Hah! I love it. Well done. :)
Her Majesty of Pluto chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
There wasn't even a need for full out sex here to get my heart pounding. Innuendo, just innuendo, worked into the actions and into the character's thought-ahem, Garrus' oral...uh, calibrations. I love how it bordered on suggestion and the way you value (metaphorical, if you like) caresses which carry the weight of something else.

I could analyse this story for all the bits I like and it will be an entire essay. Whatever it is, I LOVE this fic! Thanks for making my seat in the office...a little...warmer. ;) It made my day.
Ryoko-starwind chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I loved this story!
Midnight Unicorn chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Very much enjoyed this.
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