Reviews for The Better Man
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7
Great story, thank you so much for writing this
Ruby Slytherin chapter 1 . 1/31
it was great! i'd always imagined harry as a family man, and the best dad ever.
MPM chapter 1 . 6/11/2017
This is so heartwarming and beautiful :D
AsylumEscapee368 chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
I LOVE this so much
nayin17 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
good...loved it
Lara1221 chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
So good :)
Daziy is SoniQ chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I just love to read about those kids interactions.
WeasleyGrangerPotter chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Aww, I really liked this story and I loved all the similarities to things that were said all those years ago but also how different it was. Loved it.
Mastering My Life chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I wish there we're more like this on here!
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
From Vernon, Harry learnt how not to act.
Elless chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Beautiful. I definitely see Harry doing this.

One tiny bit of concrit because I'm neurotic when it comes to things like this:

'unbeknown to Lily' - should be 'unbeknownst'
elizdbc1 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
This was the sweetest fan fic I've ever seen...please continue ]
Allicat9 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Very funny, very sweet-a great job all around
Vitzy chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Brilliant! I liked this idea...

It's really funny though, I was recently reading a lot of 'characters read the book' fics and the first paragraph of the first book sort of became ingrained in my head. So I thought I'd write the same opening scene but with the Potters instead of the durslesy. Strange, huh?

Anyway. This sounds like a typical loving, funny, happy family. Harry really does deserve this happy ending. Once again, brilliant job!
reader chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Excellent story! I couldn't keep the smile off my face while reading this!
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