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Dana Hale chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Sad but well-written! It makes total sense that the team would take a break from each other to deal with Pilot's death in their own ways...and to have Captain not be able to deal with it at all!
LongTimeFan chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Very nice piece. I don't remember anyone addressing what might have happened afterward quite like this. Can definitely see the characters using these respective coping skills. Thanks for sharing!
JTrevizo chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Hey, if you have more, I think we're all game. I really enjoyed the team being in their separate locations and the General getting pieces of the story as he meets with each of them in turn. A very well written story and done from a unique viewpoint.
Tisley chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I was so excited to see something new!

I really liked how each of the guys was trying to deal with things in their own way. I knew it would be Matt that would finally break down and say something. I thought you really stayed true to the characters.

The only thing I didn't like was the word "complete" in the summary... :):):)