|Reviews for Key to Merwe|
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/2
Like a generic romance novel, very OOC to the movie, I want to vomit
| She-Elf4 chapter 8 . 8/12
You have the bones of an interesting story here, but there's a lot of the details that are kind of squicky. Like, sex being used as a punishment? It really didn't seem like a pretend punishment that both had agreed to beforehand. Or everyone that gets a whiff of Wikus wanting to rape him to the point that he can't even walk across camp without being attacked. Or the fact that they literally try to kill one of their own children for no discernible reason. And they're supposed to be the good guys? Maybe MNU was right to lock them up. On top of that, Wikus's reactions are incredibly relaxed. Most people would freak out at two attacks in two days, especially if they involved children.
That being said, I think it's an interesting premise to see a human trying to navigate a strange culture that's much more sexually open than his own. I think you were trying to go for an edgy slightly animalistic feel, but I personally think you missed the mark. For example, animals usually only mate when both animals are in season, and don't usually kill cubs unless it's a new dominant male taking over an entire group after the death of the old dominant male. It works well enough as a basic PWP fic, but if you wanted to go a bit deeper into Poleepkwa culture, you might try reading a little about the bonding habits of Bonobos and the hive mentality of bees and ants.
| AnimeGamerChic117 chapter 8 . 4/6/2015
YOU NEVER FINISHED THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY. ;-;
| Kai Shana chapter 8 . 2/22/2015
This is a great story but will you please update?! I'm on the edge of my seat in anticipation for the completion of this story! Don't leave a loyal reader hanging
| SilverSamurai26 chapter 8 . 2/5/2015
YES! HE WOULD!
GOD*AMN YOU AUTHOR! FINISH THIS! X'O HOW COULD YOU HAVE STOPPED THIS *RIGHT THERE*?!
You must be a monster. X'C I love the story, but I suddenly don't like you for having gone on Hiatus. Please come back to this and FINISH IT. This particular scene at least? PLEASE!
| CamaroLady chapter 8 . 7/21/2014
O.O how have I not found this until just now? I wish you would continue you left me hanging in suspense. This is wonderful work.
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/28/2014
Please come back.
| saintcorrine chapter 8 . 11/1/2013
O_O Oh sweet jesus please don't stop writing this.
| Melloyellowphase chapter 8 . 11/1/2013
UUURGHHHH! ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER!*iS DYING FROM THE WAIT*
| nhtbgr chapter 8 . 10/4/2013
The love I have for this fic is unparalleled. Update soon please this pairing needs more good fics!
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/29/2013
Great story! I just stumbled acrossed it and could not stop reading!
| Ex Mentis chapter 8 . 9/5/2013
OMFG THIS FIC IS EPIC AWESOME WIN! I had given up all hope of ever finding a decent Christopher/Wikus story, but then I found this and I was totally blown away!
Poor Wikus and his hormone-driven body fighting his logical brain. XD Just give in to the smexy hunk of Poleepkwa that is Christopher, Wikus! lol
| Krissy13 chapter 8 . 9/3/2013
Oh my gosh! We are just getting to the big emotional reveal after so long and now you tell us that you are going to take a hiatus? Man... Oh well, it was fun while it lasted. I do hope that you continue, though. Thank you for writing!
| Phoenix xxxxx chapter 8 . 8/25/2013
When I saw the notifications in my inbox I almost squealed; you're still doing a great job with this story, it's as great as ever c:
| optionalblock chapter 8 . 8/20/2013
Love it so glad you updated. Can't wait for the next chapter but please don't make me wait so long again!