|Reviews for The Lion King My Version|
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/14/2019
No it was haa zasu
| DonnaSmith chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
I like the way you write.
| wasa11030 chapter 11 . 7/5/2012
[rage face] fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck
| wasa11030 chapter 5 . 7/4/2012
awsome knew it
long live the king unless he is called scar
| wasa11030 chapter 4 . 7/4/2012
| wasa11030 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
scar is grumpy he needs a hobby like trying to be happy. -}
also i do not get why muffy is so like anikan skywalker.
| ThatLazyBch chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
| Dr.Laundry chapter 5 . 3/20/2012
Ok I am going to give my 100 percent honest opnion. I think you went to fast with the Nala, Simba relationship. You did it all too quickly. This chapter was bit repetitive to other stories I read however there is something good about it and that is making Tama an interesting character. I have no clue where she is from but I assume its one of the books or comics I never bothered reading. I know thats where Kopa came from. But the point is I read many stories here with Tama as a character and in most situations Tama is pretty much the worst character. You managed to make her more interesting and only one other person did that with there story in my opnion. From what i read atleast. Nice job and I will continue to read
| Dr.Laundry chapter 4 . 3/20/2012
I personally don't understand why so many people think Simba and Nala liked each other that way as cubs. But oh well. Over all this story has been good from what I read. Its way different from the original plot so its not repetitive. So far so good
| Vitani825 chapter 19 . 3/8/2012
This was an excellent chapter. Its kinda hard for me to write wedding chapters in stories since I don't get practice at it. Do you have any ideas on how to incorporate a wedding in a story? By the way, its also kinda hard to write my own version of The Lion King 1 and 2 when I don't want to get completely off topic. Do you have any ideas for filler chapters so the story will be longer than each of the movies were?
| Dr.Laundry chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Well I finally decided to read the first chapter and i was impressed with it. You did a very nice job making changes to the story. I also like how you include zira since most people are like " where was she in the first movie?"
| Lavenderpaw chapter 19 . 12/15/2011
oh god, cute enough! I love Bluey. over all it was a fun read.
ttyl for now. :)
| Lavenderpaw chapter 7 . 12/10/2011
not bad, remember your punctuation. periods, exclamation marks, etc. :)
| Lavenderpaw chapter 5 . 12/8/2011
tama's mean... :/
| Lavenderpaw chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
huh, how could Malka a cub take on Mufasa?