Reviews for Oculis
bakasaru264 chapter 1 . 4/11
Luffy I love you! And I love your story, too! Thank you for sharing such lovely story with us.
xxXx chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
Good one author-san!
HoothootOwls chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
I loved it.
Guester chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Love it
Akai Tenshi96 chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
awwwww :3
Neko11 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Wow that was beautiful! I love how you described his eyes :) Great job!
smoll Gcat chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
AWWWWWWWWW3
roo17 chapter 1 . 5/14/2012
Excellent! You captured it all perfectly! :D
Lyneel chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
simply beautiful :)
Darkness34 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
AMAZING, SO MANY EMOTIONS IN ONE STORY! I believe my facial expressions went something like this: -_- O_O :D :/ :( T_T :D
Turtieform chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Awww, that's a touching story! I love it! ;)

And I love nakamaship~

I'm not sure but I think that something's missing, but still, maybe it's just me.

Haha, as I was saying, your story has a great sequence, and just enough fluff and a wee bit of angst! It's one of the most awesome stories I've ever read for One Piece! :)
Medusa's Hairdresser chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
"The islands to the south...are very warm...their heads get all hot...And they're all idiots!" Sorry, this was the first thing that came to mind when I read how Luffy thought about music in the story.

Not a bad story, but as said, not the best you have written. I guess that is more a compliment for your other stories than critism for this one.

(finally got my computer back! Yay!)
melodisz chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
I loved his eyes, very well-written. )
IcePrincessKitsuna chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Wow great job it was very deep loved the details

luv u

CLL
AquaTitaniaMiyuki chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
nice! :)