Reviews for Never Ending
dappledleaf1 chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
Aww. How sweet
Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
I love this story!could you get more chapters?
Katherine chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
it was awsome although I think it should be a little longer in my opinion
Katherine chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I liked this story better than the other one!
hungergamesfan77 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
can u write more
Mothstar chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
so sweet...i'm tearing up...great, but some grammatical errors...but still really really good! :')
Lifepaw chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Kallik is amazing. I like to point out you misspelled eyes as eys. Update soon
Redglowingheart chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I think it's pretty good! You just published it today huh? Don't worry, I'm pretty sure you'll be getting more reviews in no time. The only problem is that not many have read Spirits In The Stars, so they possibly might not want any spoilers. Anyways, I think the bears are pretty well in-character, but a little, JUST A LITTLE, OOC, but that's okay. Lots of my characters were OOC anyways. Still, great job and this story has a lot of potential.