Reviews for Paternal
theformulaofpudding chapter 7 . 8/24/2013
*screams in joy/emotion*
Starryflower chapter 6 . 10/24/2011
Have I ever mentioned how much I love you u_u

Favourite writer on here.

End of story.

Your style is fabulous, and.

I just love what you write about.
cynicalbroad chapter 4 . 8/31/2011
Kouru-Kage chapter 4 . 8/30/2011
Dammit, now I can't get the scenario of a potential-breakdown inducing movie being shown in one of John's classes and Dave finding out and then breaking in and kidnapping him from his classroom before it happens.

But whatever.

I'll take note when this one updates. *bookmarking*

These kids, all so adorable. Grouphugs everywhere, guys!

This is all fuzzy-inside inducing. It's all so heartbreaking and so heartwarming.
NightPredator chapter 3 . 8/15/2011
DEAR GOD. Why did I come straight from Funebre to this. THANKS FOR MAKING ME CRY SO MUCH.

But seriously. Good job. The fact that I had tears streaming down my face, blurring the screen, this entire things proves that you did a good job. 3
Anon chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
Ohmygog why are you so good at writing fics?
cynicalbroad chapter 3 . 8/7/2011

I really like this~
xxx0 chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
oh wait. i just looked at the username and i'm totally not surprised at the quality of this fic. i've loved every fic i've read by you. :o
xxx0 chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
dude, this is so f*cking sweet and sad. it's totally depressing to see john so messed up about his dad but it's fer sure realistic. i mean, it was his *dad*. even if they weren't attached at the hip, he still cared a lot about him and he essentially did let him die, even if it wasn't directly his fault and if he was preoccupied with sburb and karkat and everyone. :c

i was so sad seeing that bit. i kind of wish he'd attained god tier and taken jack on and saved his dad with the windy thing and everything. that would've been bad. *ss. fer real.

you do a really good job with conveying emotion. :,c

i also really loved jade's perspective and how you changed the wording around. it was adorable how she was all sad over the disney movies. i agree with her. :,3
God Tier chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
-sobbu- I feel John.. I feel him.

Love the story.