Reviews for The Echo of Unspoken Words
Dreamcatcher56 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
understand her frustration and need to revisit a place that turned her life around...and not in the best way.
Ninja C chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
AAAGH AND NOW I'M SAD AGAIN. Stop being such a good writer.

-Ninja C!
HeKillsWithHisSmile chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Aww that was really sweet! So cute at the end! Great story!
thisisasecretnow chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Ahhh. My heart. Ow.

So, criticism: I didn't entirely get the part with "You knew..." I mean, yeah, he knew they wouldn't be together forever, but I didn't get the looking and the face... eh.

And then... I suppose it doesn't seem very Rose-like to be angry with him...? She'd forgive him practically anything. BUT, that would invalidate the premise of the story, so I'll just go over here and suspend my belief, mmkay?

And, praise: Ah. I have no words for you. Feel free to continue stomping on my heart with your lovely words.