|Reviews for Force Jumper|
| rjsw chapter 32 . 3/8
This is really amazing. Keep it up!
| ULTRA SONIC chapter 32 . 2/20
Looks like everything is definitely coming to a head, as Anakin said best back in Chapter 10.
And Anakin meeting up with not just his old pal Kitster, but 3PO as well was awesome, and I had been wondering what happened to Goldenrod, since Shmi and Watto were killed. But I'm glad he's still intact and he now has coverings.
At least now Blake has two tutors: Grandpa Ruwee and 3PO, so at least his education is covered.
And finally Obi-Wan meets up with Team Skywalker (Anakin, Padme, Hunter, Blake, Sabe, Sifo, Quinlan, Ruwee, R2, and 3PO) and is now their eyes and ears at the Temple. Hopefully he'll be able to gather as much intel as possible without attracting suspicion on Mace's end.
Now that Obi-Wan's in on the whole deal, I don't think it's gonna be long before Ahsoka ends up involved as well. No way is Kenobi gonna be able to keep *this* a secret from his own student.
And speaking of other people finding out, I really hope that within the 5-year time gap that a few of the Clone-Troopers end up stumbling upon the Force-Jumper/Xal'Karr conflict. Even with the Clone-Wars going on, there's no way guys like Rex and Cody wouldn't end up being in the middle of it at some point, albeit unintentionally.
Or just to really throw a wrench into the works, what if one of Mace's flunkies discovers Obi-Wan being on to Mace's operation, and decides to go to kidnap Satine just to get Obi-Wan to surrender (or something like that). We all know that Mace will do whatever he has to do to keep his organization from being fully exposed to the masses, and if that means assassinating a few politicians, then so be it.
Either way, Obi-Wan's life as he knows it has changed, and I think he'll definitely like visiting Team Skywalker from time to time.
Next chapter's really gonna be interesting, that's for sure. But the part that I'm wondering is what will get the Force-Jumpers Anakin meets to realize that the Xal'Karr won't stop until all Jumpers are eradicated, including those who aren't involved in the conflict.
And last but certainly not least, Palpatine. Man, it's gotta be frustrating for him to see that there are one-two-many wild cards interfering with his plans, and if there's one thing Palpatine hates, it's surprises that he himself did not come up with. Oh well, LOL!
But let's face it, if he was to go mano-a-mano with a Force-Jumper that is skilled with a lightsaber, Sidious would be in trouble.
With the chance encounter with the Order of the Sun, it's not gonna be Palpatine that meets that member, will it? I'm hoping it's Anakin that encounters the member instead. Because if it's Sidious...there's so many things that can go wrong.
In all, awesome chapter Lilac, looking forward to the next one!
PS: Okay, with the jumping ability not being genetic, that pretty much means Luke and Leia may not inherit it, but I hope Luke gets that ability, if no one else.
PPS: I don't think it's much of a stretch to say that the Jedi-Order's reputation could take nasty hits once everything is all said and done. Put more specifically, a double-whammy type of hit, and I'll tell you why: When Mace's organization is finally exposed, many people will wonder how the Jedi Order didn't know Mace and several others were conducting their own operations behind everyone's backs, and any politicians who are anti-Jedi will use this to their advantage. In addition to that, there's also the matter of Darth Sidious. If that monster also ends up exposed and is either killed or flees by the skin of his teeth, that could be the straw that breaks the Bantha's back, for the masses will come to the realization that they cannot trust an Order that has become so complacent to the point of irrelevancy.
| BookLover chapter 32 . 2/10
Love it and she is Quinlan wife and the mother of his son. Please Please Please PLEASE don't Kill Satine PLEASE!
| BookLover chapter 32 . 2/10
Love it and She is Quinlan wife and the mother of his son. Don't kill Satine please don't kill her.
| sexystarwarslover chapter 32 . 2/12
YAY ANOTHER CHAPTER! AND THIS WAS AMAZING! Obi Wan finally reunites with Anakin after all these years and it was so well written! The humor, the strength they have towards each other and the humor when Anakin suddenly gets up and jumps Obi Wan to the dock and back and then the quip with Quinlan and Obi Wan about "Anakin being the death of me" ha! love it! And now Obi Wan is going to help them against Mace, this is going to be great! and the Anakin and Padme moment at the end :) Well done and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
| Destiny Changer chapter 32 . 2/10
Thanks for explaining Mace Windu's indirect involvement in Qui-Gon's murder, and Obi-Wan will probably be a great help to Anakin and his loved ones. I didn't think the war would last more than 3 years in this story. In a previous review, I remember suggesting that Padme should kiss her boys lips on her wedding day in case they wanted one. You know how kids can be. I just want to ask if Padme isn't the type of mom who gives semilong platonic mouth kisses to her kids. Also in the next chapter, please list how many slave rings Anakin has destroyed and how many are left. Please check out a Smallville fanfic entitled "The Journey To Greatness". You have a very good day.
| Guest chapter 32 . 2/9
So, Obi-Wan has officially been read in. Ahsoka will not be far behind him, I bet, her being his apprentice and just as hard-headed as Anakin.
In reply to your own response to my previous review: . . . Uh, I think you misunderstood. What I was referring to is your tendency to for Padme (in fact, most of the women in your fics) tend to be damsels in distress (Padme gets kidnapped every vignette) and Anakin has to save them. This happens too often and honestly, it's getting old. Lampshading is the characters talking about how an event happens too often. They'll make passing remarks or maybe poke fun at each other about it. You could have a character make a friendly wisecrack or two about it. For a better explanation, Look it up on TV tropes.
| Kungfukittykat chapter 32 . 2/9
Can't wait to see more!
| froovygirl chapter 32 . 2/10
I was almost giddy that Obi-Wan is working with the good guys now. This AU is such a departure from SW canon, and really fascinating in where you've taken it. Selfishly, though, since the next chapter will encompass a passage of five years, I'm wondering when Luke and Leia will make an appearance...
Thanks for your update!
| Jedi Angel001 chapter 32 . 2/9
Great chapter looking forward to the next one.
| StoryArtistNamedS chapter 32 . 2/9
I can't freaking wait! I was just checking if you updated and saw you did. I love it and Threepio is back in the picture, this is great! Though I can't wait for the bad guys to be thwarted; I can't stand Windu he's like Genral Zod in the MOS movie it's just freaky! Any way (sorry I usually babble when I'm excited) keep up the good work can't wait for the new chapter.
| Hannah Jane chapter 32 . 2/9
Wow, this is getting intense. I'm glad to finally see and update. Will you be updating Forever Destined soon? I have a question, I've been watching Sam and Cat and I'm wondering if your using Sam as a character for Jeena?
| Harry2 chapter 32 . 2/9
Well, at least Obi-Wan is now in on the Force Jumpers and that Knightblade and Anakin are one in the same. Now, its time to start working on getting the evidence against Mace and his organization. Even Palpatine is not happy about the way things are going, as they threaten to ruin his carefully laid out plans.
| Avalon West chapter 31 . 2/4
The plot just keeps getting better and better! You seriously need to publish a book sometime! Your plots are always engaging and the romance is heartstopping! :)
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 1 . 2/2
Interesting opening chapter. The second to last paragrah is way too long and needs to be broken up into at least two, likely three.