Reviews for Torch
Unsuspected chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
I'll agree that it isn't your best, and that you could definitely do it better if you wrote it now. Of course, I also agree that's something to be proud of, because you've really improved in a short period of time. Well, somewhat short. It sort of depends who's looking at it. Anyway, that isn't to say that this isn't good. If I were to say that it's terrible, I'd be lying. There were several especially strong paragraphs in there that I quite liked. So, keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll write next.