Reviews for Meditate
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
This was great. Good job!
DAIrinchan chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Hmmm, i think Kanda's going to have more than a little trouble clearing his mind to meditate after that. Much love!
Clare Co chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
This is cute. .n_n.
96bittersweetblackcat chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Awww cute!
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
So cute!
kim-onka chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Also an elaboration on a manga scene, I see. And you made it much more complete, as for my liking :) The characters' feelings and thoughts seem very accurate.

If I were you, I'd avoid splitting speeches into two paragraphs, each with "Lenalee said", like you did twice.

I forgot to say: I like your penname! I support that.
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Aww~! So cute~!
Myne0 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Hahaha~ I think I like this pairing better than AllenxLenalee XD Lavi's nice too, though :)

Making a sweet moment even sweeter~
HowDoYouDoop chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Baaaww! So short and sweet! Simply charming!
tessameh chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
aw, Kanda was so cute 3

nice story, short and sweet (:
Reality Tales chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
This was adorable! Loved it (:
D.Gray-Man archive 'Stalker chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
An enjoyable read~

It fits the storyline very well; overall, I've liked how the characters interacted (even though it's a little short to me ).

I saw that you used the term "mother fucker" two times. Excuse me to say this, but I hope to see a change of one them inside this fic to balance it out. This is just my opinion; please don't take it to heart~

There's one more thing to point out. I've spotted a mistake inside the fic and I quote the sentence: Shocked and unable to shake off this new sensation, he fell pray to her soft lips. The "prey" should be "prey"?

I give a thumbs up on this fic~

-Man archive 'Stalker'