Reviews for Angel in the Moonlight
Not-So-GentleFist chapter 1 . 5/4
Nice Lemon :)
Hektols chapter 1 . 2/22
Very nice.
michumichu79 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
HERMOSO
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
That was a very good short story loved it
Chelty-Chan chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
O.O
oooooooooooookay...that went a completely different direction than i thought. i think they went aliiiitle bit overboard with the dirty talk and all but hey...what do i know right?
anyway...um...i guess illl just stop there cos i dont want you to think im flaming or nothing..i HATE flamers and flames..
anyway...bye!
Tomon chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Eh, I somehow forgot to review this story! It's nice and very sweet :) While it escalated pretty quickly, I liked it. Especially in comparison with manga
UpYours13 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
This is probably my FAV. NARUHINA story that I've read. If the series goes the way that it has been going recemntly, then this would be the PERFECT WAY TO END THE SERIES!
ili777 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
I love this, it's so well written and with so good plot.
Thank you so much for writing it in english, cause else I would have never find this and read it and it's just so awesome, I can't really describe it with words
Amazing job
SpiritWriterXXX chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
wow, quite the story you have here
Black Bullet of Seven chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
ive read this story like 10 times and all i can think is AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWwWwW. it was the first story i read on this website 2 a year ago
Creepy-Pasta chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Aww, so sweet. Keep up the good work love it!
Apollymi28 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
I simply loved it. I would have loved to have seen that happen. Although this weeks manga 559 was nice.
sprticus chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
awesome story. i hope you continue with another chapter,i want to find out if her father and the elders accept Naruto to be with her.
ScarletVirus33 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
You get major props W.A.A. That was one of the sweetest, most romantic Naruhina stories I have ever read. I have browsed many tales involving the Hyuga girl and her ramen loving crush, but I have to say in terms of length, pacing and the eventual payoff this is one the best ever. As far as the negative aspects of this fic, I'm proud to say that there is none that stands out to cause the story any dismay. And in closing I must complement you for your first attempt at a lemon in english as this doesn't seem like the effort of a first timer but of that of a seasoned pro. Here's hoping that your muse will lead to writing more Naruhina fan ficts that are just as hot, spicy and straight up magnificent. Looking forward to your next effort. Peace out!
ForeverWildfire2.0 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Could you do a sequel about when they tell everyone that they're together and they tell the elders about Naruto being a Namikaze?
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