Reviews for an unfortunate series of naked mishaps
Citrine Griffin chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
but...don't...strainers...have...holes?
Anonymous chapter 5 . 11/30/2012
I know it is over now, but I think it would be great if you did a chapter with Jet! Jet wouldn't know who to stare at more... ;) It would be so funny!
scorchedtrees chapter 5 . 11/30/2012
These are really funny x3 You should do one with Hakoda or something... I think that would be scary.
QuietShadowz chapter 5 . 5/24/2012
bahaha this was all too funny xDDD oh the awkward ness and the nakedness lol poor katara and zuko they just keep getting interupted and well being seen naked by their friends lol. i feel a little bad for aang but he had to find out eventually and the way it happened wa rather funny. though i think my favorite was suki xD

This fic is epic...i normally dont use that word because it get annoying after awhile but i can think of no other word to describe the pure awesomeness of this fic

well i guess pure-unadultured-awesomeness works

Shadow
Purple Dragon Ranger chapter 5 . 5/20/2012
is it a bad thing that i can picture aang entering the room on his little air ball scooter thing? this is really good. keep it up!
GaaraHinataWake chapter 5 . 11/9/2011
This was great, I would add more to this review but I honestly don't know what to say so it was funny, I enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait until you get back from your trip so that I can read more of "Not stalking Zuko" ta ta for now. :D
RedPandasAreCool17 chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
Ok. I haven't even finished this yet but I just had too. "Cleavage for everyone!" GENIUS! I JUST DIED! lmfao!
lazyguy90 chapter 5 . 8/24/2011
Hahaha, oh this is hilarious. Nice work.
Charmed Ravenclaw chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
Iroh gets epic win for using tea as a metaphor for sex. Go Iroh! That's skill right there.
badkidoh chapter 5 . 8/13/2011
it was good
kimberlyisawesome chapter 3 . 8/9/2011
I made a t-shirt for my older brother. It has in the front 'You can touch my cock' and a pic of a anime chicken and on the back it says 'You can touch my ass' and a pic of a anime donkey. I sometimes can get disgusting *evil grin*
MichelleZB chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I like the premise of this story so far.

It is a bit odd to have whispered bits written in all caps. Capitals are used to emphasize, and often indicated yelling or an increase in volume. I don't think you should keep it like that, even though you explain in beforehand. Write something that works in writing, not in spoken language.
ArrayePL chapter 5 . 7/30/2011
The end? Why? Thank you for sharing.
Em Dixon chapter 5 . 7/30/2011
And I think you just found the one foil to Murphy's Naked Law: Chair. They should sell that. I love Aang in all his obliviousness, trying to give Katara tips on hiding Zuko. Thanks for the early morning giggles!
Em Dixon chapter 4 . 7/30/2011
Aw, shoot Sokka! Now you can have a big brother for real! Glad they did finally get their uninterrupted sexytimes, sad that Katara got stuck in the door, and inadvertently flashed Sokka her naughty bits. I don't know, but this still might be part of Murphy's Naked Law. Something went wrong. Someone found out. Someone saw her naked.
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