|Reviews for Blue Star|
| AmethystWings chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Allen has issues, that wedding dress just does not work for him, lol. Van assumed a little too much, no? Overall, this made me laugh, thanks. Good job.
| thepinkmartini chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
LMAO. hilarious! 'dumbass van' part really had me cracking. and what's the cloak you're talking about? some kind of women's wear i presume.
| artszy chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
You are amazing and talented.I love reading your there going to be a second chapter to this one?
| Doctor Kiba chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Have I ever told you that I love your stories? Allen cross-dressing is hilarious and Van's memory of the bridge was very... nice.
This is just great and adorable. Especially where Van knows Hitomi is just faking the big ol eyes, but he still can't resist.
| SuilsSaifir chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Welcome back to this fandom... :P
First, quickly: "Hitomi groaned loudly and all Van saw was red. nice" You left in my comment.
Secondly I liked it but I think I'm used to your Allen-demasculating/cross-dressing antics :S
I loved the memory of the kiss on the bridge, dirty boy isn't he :P Very nice.