|Reviews for Unspeakable|
| senawario chapter 1 . 4/27
very promising plot, but totally disappointed that Malfoy survived
| The Amol chapter 7 . 4/10
This is the first time I read this story. I wasn't much interested in Michael Corner. What a mistake it was !
Marley was a tortured soul. I felt sorry for her. She was driven to madness by her past. She was the last name on her own kill list. Creepiness factor was off the chart here.
Michael was a broken hero. These kind of heroes are more relatable than badass heroes. He should have asked DA's help though. Surely Terry would have helped him.
He married that Auror Trudi, didn't he?
Who is under suspicion in Strangers at Drakeshaugh?
It seems Michael just can't catch a break.
Kudos to both of you authors.
| Prince Pondincherry chapter 6 . 4/22/2016
Wow, Michael's as bad as Harry and his friends first year. He made one paltry attempt at alerting the proper authorities and then went about the investigation all by himself, when it would have been much easier through official channels. At least he finally contacted them when he'd figured everything out.
| Prince Pondincherry chapter 4 . 4/22/2016
That last line! Wow! Chills!
| Prince Pondincherry chapter 2 . 4/22/2016
It's too bad Michael didn't wait to talk to someone from the DA, they definitely would have helped him.
| Teneombre chapter 7 . 9/11/2015
A sadness story. i think i can't say more. It's least and enought in the same time.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/22/2015
I think the names of the mulcibers are getting a little confused in your series. You've got Hephaestus, Olenus, I think maybe a Philotus and now Patrick. Are these different people or the same? Can't remember where I found all of them, but I think a couple were in looking for lily.
| LittleTom45 chapter 7 . 6/14/2015
Very good story. I really enjoyed that. Thanks for sharing. I hope to read more in the MIT and RANDOM system series.
| stealacandy chapter 7 . 3/23/2015
What's more, yet another murder mystery - I love those - and this one you've actually seen through to the end, tragic as it were.
Hope this'll set a trend for all of your other murder mysteries too.
| poetrywoman chapter 1 . 2/28/2015
Really enjoyed this one. I like Michael as a math genius/detective.
| poetrywoman chapter 7 . 2/24/2015
This was so sad and so well written. Well done.
| Gundum M chapter 7 . 1/7/2015
well that war dark.
| Vento-del-Sud chapter 7 . 12/25/2014
I’ve read most of your stories and it’s a shame I’m only now writing a review.
This story is fascinating and deep, and you’ve raised very complex problems. What is justice? Revenge? Forgiveness? Can you be light if your deeds are dark? You try to give answers to these questions, but they still leave controversial feelings. One of the best pieces of writing. Thank you.
| FriendofMolly chapter 7 . 9/20/2014
Wow that came out of nowhere. I remembered that when Michael met "Dawn", he recognized her as Marlene. In the back of her mind she thought, ok it's a lie, but yeah. All that time she was denying who she really was. But this, written in the same way the 'killer' chapters were, makes me question just who was the killer? I am in a quandary.
| FriendofMolly chapter 6 . 9/20/2014
Wow! I know this is coming to a close. I can't see her not killing Lucius, but I think she's willing to kill Michael and Lauren. I think after she does that she will probably drink the wine herself. I must go to the next.