|Reviews for The Night Before|
| Sunii91 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Ooo this is so cute! I laughed several times, no lie! haha
Criticisms? Don't forget to proof read! I saw some missing prepositions and word choice errors ( I think you meant Al took his position, not potions hahaha)
Anyways update soon! I'll be back for more.
| mute-writer chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
:D Very much enjoyed.
| lady vonne chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Aw, very cute. :) I love the mischievous Al ad James Potter. Their personalities seem pretty canon (or as canon as they can get with what little of them we were given from the books, of course) and you've done a great job giving them character and personality. :)
Anyways, if you have time, I'd love for you to check out some of the one-shots I've written on my profile. I've got only a handful so far, but I'm working on more at the moment, as well. I'd love to hear your opinion! Thanks so much and, really, great job! -Vonne