LOVING THE MALFOYS HAHAHAHHA

i love thisssss

LOVING THE MALFOYS HAHAHAHHA

i love thisssss

For your first story, this was amazing! Thank you for this beautiful escape

Well.. they're certainly getting along with one another.

oh shit.. didn't hermione get raped? Feelsbad.

Is hermione having sex with harry or ron? Or both?

Well... hermione saved that kid.

I loved your version of these characters! particularly the malfoys, I really enjoyed a version of them to root for. and narcissa in particular was amazing. I also really like how you had draco and Ron interact. very refreshing and its nice to have a fic where Ron isn't an ass or an idiot. and then the whole concept of the cave. I just liked it. very easy read.

I love your characterization and sense of humor! One of my new fave all around authors.

Absolutely adorable! Thank you for sharing your creative genius!

I loved that! The Draco and Ron interaction was amazing! Honestly this whole story is amazing! Thank you fir sharing your creative genius!

loved it! thank you!

im going to give this fic the benefit of doubt as its quite old and I sincerely hope the author has progressed farrrrr far beyond this. I always review though, once I've reached a point where the cringe is just far too much for me and I find myself skimming in search of good parts.
I would've included in the very beginning of this story that the characters are incredibly OOC. The storyline as a whole seems to rush forward at an alarmingly unrealistic pace and it's always very disappointing to realize a fic is far more sex based than plot based. To the point of being downright inappropriate more than once. The entirety of the breast scene was deeply disturbing and honestly a bit offensive if I'm being completely honest. A life was on the line but it was still all about being errotic? The Viktor backstory was intensely disturbing given their age difference and Hermione's core values. And I truly do mean this in a constructive criticism way but the sex scene felt as though it was written by someone who had never had sex before .

Back to the plot, you have to think of what exactly these two characters are living through, the things they've already seen and had to do. Taking all of that into considerationit was very hard to read. There were also a lot of moments where you seemed to forget they could transfigure or charm something. Force them into close quarters sure, but make it believable. I sincerely hope you've progressed and improved over the years with your writing and can look back on this story and just remember where you started lol