Reviews for Finding The One You Lost
Robin.D chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
i loved it :o) that was a good story :o) :o)
azzhole911 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
that izz jus cuuuutttttteeeeeeee
Ladey J chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
loved the story! perfect Jasper!
Sonja Whitlock chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
What a sweet story. I loved the poems you created. Thank you for sharing.
NatalieLynn chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
For the most part, this was a great story, but it just kind of fizzled to a stop like a soda losing it's effervescence. If you did not want to include the honeymoon, you would have been better off ending after their long morning shower made them run late and they were dashing to make their flight. The whole McDonald's and flight part is what dragged it out. Any of his in flight thoughts watching her sleep that you wanted to include (like the playground story brought on by the scent of her hair) you could add into the part where he watched her sleep while waiting for the alarm to go off. Your other choice would be to include their honeymoon in the story and end with their flight back home to truly begin their life together.
fallgoddess chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Ooohhh... that was so cute!
TrueSkye chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
No wonder you won "Best Vows," those were romantic and so beautiful!
slc6548 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Sweet!
Kim Ginsberg chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
awwwwwwwwwwww I loved this!
deerslayer1100 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
This was beautiful, that's all I got to say!
goldfishie1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Loved it! It was so sweet that they were looking for each other. Sexy Jasper in the shower is so yummy!
TwilightAddict71484 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
wow! all i can is wow!
twimama77 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
VERY COOL