|Reviews for Veränderung|
| MidMorningSong chapter 8 . 3/7
Gawd you write the interaction between Rin and Yukio so well and describe Rin's feelings to the point where I can feel my stomach twisting in sympathy for him.
I read this story some time ago but didn't have an account at the time but made a note to come back and tell you that this is an absolute work of art, and I sincerely hope you continue writing this story, even if it is just a little bit your style is so gripping it's hard to find anything that pulls you in so much and really lets you see out of the character's eyes and feel their emotions! Even if you're not doing any more know I'll still be coming back to re-read this masterpiece, even unfinished this is a real treasure
| Silveriolu chapter 10 . 2/28
Hey! Hey! Update please!
This is a really awesome story and I would hate for it to go to waste!
Seriously just please just type up something ANYTHING and I'll be happy ;-;
| book keeper 2000 chapter 1 . 2/18
so soooo cute!
| Jay Lightning Strike chapter 10 . 2/13
Hey. You. *points at author* Yes, you. Are you going to just stop here *pokes author in cheek* or are yer gonna get to work on the rest of this story? Cause otherwise... Rin might come after you for leaving him like this... and Ill tell him where you are *fades slowly into darkness* so update you please must!
| SerenePhenix chapter 10 . 2/12
I must tell you that this fic is absolutely gorgeous! You got the characters spot on and I loved how you dealt with certain aspects of the revelation(s) that the manga did not manage to cover as of yet. You express yourself so well and it is really great. I also find it kind of cute how you use German for the titles of each chapter (there are just some misspellings but that is just me rambling as a native speaker so sorry asdfghjkl... and I actually don't even have a right to critizise anything concerning this story).
Anyway, this thing is really a masterpiece!
| Digidestined Ninja of Sunshine chapter 3 . 1/25
Knowing how long your chapters are, I know that I've stumbled into a story that will keep me busy for quite a while. Considering I've just finished one of my favorite book series and the next book doesn't come out till April 1st, I thank you for that. This will keep me distracted.
As for your writing... I am deeply impressed. Even though your chapters are lengthy, you are able to stay consistent and not bore the reader, as well as stay on track. Your writing skills are incredibly exquisite and you have a beautiful way of portraying your plot. Character wise, you are able to capture the personalities of them all, as well as there youth, despite the whole age gap between them all. And in all that, a sense of humor lies beneath. I applaud you for this.
Happy writing... I currently have seven more chapters to read. _
| MisteryMaiden chapter 10 . 1/18
Oh god, my stomach! It hurts! Angel the girl! It's perfect! I love it! Update soon! God, I need to stop laughing, it hurts!
| MisteryMaiden chapter 8 . 1/18
Aaaaand Enter Mephisto! I was wondering when he was going to rear his head...love the story so far but I do have a question...Is the reason that the chapter titles are mostly in German because Mephisto speaks German or because of something else?
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/30/2013
rofl angel in girl costume...freaking hilarious...epic
| Crimson Siyrean chapter 10 . 12/15/2013
this story is amazing, where did you go? ;_;
| tarballGZ chapter 10 . 12/14/2013
Please start writing again! I love this story so much! I want to see how this Rin/Shirou/Yukio would go through the canonical plot (and how it would change things...like the Bon motive rant or the amusement park)! I can't stop thinking of the characters as your versions when I read the main manga now. And Shirou is still alive... Why'd you stoooooooooop... :(
| paracuties chapter 10 . 12/5/2013
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA this is hilarious! Love how you made Angel crossdress and everything. HILARIOUS. And. WHY. DID. YOU. STOP. WRITING. THIS.
WHYYYY?! This is so good! I want to read MORE. And Rin's awesome, too. He's in character, and super cute as a little kid. So why did you stop writing this story?! You were so good at it!
REALLY hope you'll pick it up again. And the German's cool too, especially since I'm excited when I recognize a couple little words-considering I'm currently taking my second year of German.
Keep writing, even if it's not for this!
| taiShafie chapter 10 . 12/4/2013
Waa, i see this story have not been updated for a year, but update please. . . I love your story and i want to read more. Personally i think your story is the best AnE fanfic in FFnet, be it the plot, chara and the writing, so please update :)
| Ame no Kagaseo chapter 10 . 11/24/2013
Just finished reading the entire story in one go. And I must say, I'm impressed.
The plot is simple, yet intriguing. If a reader looks closely, the divergences from canon are small, minute. Okamura Rin's life occurs differently, yet he retains his exuberant personality.
I am a bit sad however, because it seems like this was last updated more than a year ago. The story was reaching a focal point too...
The German titles are amusing; they seem to add to the 'coolness' factor of the story.
I can't decide if I should bug you via pm or not, but update once more, okay? Readers like me are waiting ;)
| echoing song chapter 10 . 10/16/2013
Great story! I like the way you diverged from canon, but are still keeping the plot kinda close to it. (Canon events are present, but are different). Also love your portrayal of Shura.